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Kill her
Kill her now
Why don’t you
A knife on your hand
What’s it for
Just kill her
And get her out of the way
What now
You coward
How can you hope to be free
When you can’t kill her
You can’t be free
If you allow her to live
What did you say
She is dead?
No she is not
She lives in your head
She lives in your heart
Kill it….kill her
Why don’t you
A knife on your hand
What’s it for
Just kill her
And get her out of the way
What now
You coward
How can you hope to be free
When you can’t kill her
You can’t be free
If you allow her to live
What did you say
She is dead?
No she is not
She lives in your head
She lives in your heart
Kill it….kill her
Published 15th May 2012
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15th May 2012 1:43am
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15th May 2012 11:03am
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15th May 2012 11:08am
Sometimes graceful Grace can be a disgrace too...haha!! Thanks Gabriel, for reading and commenting.
Anonymous
15th May 2012 4:09pm
I AM TRYING TO POST MY PRIZE IN THIS BOX....
....I award you the silver dagger award for a wonderful KILL HER poem....which is exactly the way I feel...Great poem, I expect nothing less from you
Peace
Kitty
....I award you the silver dagger award for a wonderful KILL HER poem....which is exactly the way I feel...Great poem, I expect nothing less from you
Peace
Kitty
15th May 2012 11:44pm
Hi Kitty, wow! Thank you so much. Thats how I feel right now. But what can one do when one live alongside someone whose yardstick is a saint gone to heaven...? Thank you for the award, my dear!
17th May 2012 1:17am
Oh wow, I love this...the last stanza reminds me of a movie I saw...this man couldn't get his dead mother and her endless words of criticism out of his head, and the only way to get it to stop, was to kill himself. Then he did.
So good, Grace.
So good, Grace.
17th May 2012 2:47am
Hi Rachel...cool movie that. Any title? anyways, thank you for reading and commenting.
