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Stars Write
If stars could write, I wonder what they would say.
Would it float there and dream of yesterday's
would it mark down the seconds that you came into being
Or did it marvel at the oceans and the seas it has seen
If stars can write, would it be in a flurry
With swoops of decadent loops written down in a hurry
Would it try to get each and every word out before it flickers
Would you know if the star can get it all down any quicker
If you were the star in the sky, we see
What would you write and convey to me
Would it be of love or of loss
Would it be of deception at any cost
I am but one of the stars up above
They cannot retain what I need to say
in words that I love.
So, I will return home, which is called
Starsrite.
If you look into the sky
You will see that I am the first one out tonight.
Would it float there and dream of yesterday's
would it mark down the seconds that you came into being
Or did it marvel at the oceans and the seas it has seen
If stars can write, would it be in a flurry
With swoops of decadent loops written down in a hurry
Would it try to get each and every word out before it flickers
Would you know if the star can get it all down any quicker
If you were the star in the sky, we see
What would you write and convey to me
Would it be of love or of loss
Would it be of deception at any cost
I am but one of the stars up above
They cannot retain what I need to say
in words that I love.
So, I will return home, which is called
Starsrite.
If you look into the sky
You will see that I am the first one out tonight.
Author's Note
Do you want to know where starsrite is? I can tell you.
starsrite.com
starsrite.com
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Re. Stars Write
5th Sep 2024 00:24am
A beautiful piece of poetry only you Fia can create. Well done my friend!
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5th Sep 2024 1:08am
They watch us from afar, half the time, but our predictability must be infuriating... if not enlightening. JJ
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Re. Stars Write
5th Sep 2024 4:09am
Dear F,
Charming, sweet and absolutely endearing write. I really enjoyed the pictures this created in my mind and the ending was lovely. H🌷
Charming, sweet and absolutely endearing write. I really enjoyed the pictures this created in my mind and the ending was lovely. H🌷
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5th Sep 2024 11:06am
Re. Stars Write
5th Sep 2024 4:45am
Brilliantly written, Fia. Executed flawlessly. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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5th Sep 2024 11:07am
Re. Stars Write
5th Sep 2024 6:27am
Hello Fia, how are you; very nice write, dig this... take good care: deadwolf
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5th Sep 2024 11:08am
Re. Stars Write
5th Sep 2024 10:09am
Very nice piece Fia. I wonder what I would write if I were a star. Take care and keep them coming.
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5th Sep 2024 12:26pm
A multifaceted talent poetess with an abracadabra tricks to astound the readers and the beholders..
Nice creation Fia. stay happy as always. Hamid
Nice creation Fia. stay happy as always. Hamid
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8th Sep 2024 1:21pm
Awesome introduction to the website! A star light with a mind that's bright. Only you, could darken the night!
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