Unwilling To Conform

You did a good job of building upon your concept all the way through.  The synonymous elements capture the mood of the picture you were painting.  Solid description, but clean and tidy, your presentation has a refreshing give and take balance.   Nice carrying of a rhyme scheme as well.  This seems to be an internally haunting disposition within oneself, upon the realization of how evil, corrupt, immoral, and dark the world is.  Life is kind of a gamble and game, and there is definite risk involved.  Some of this seems to pertain to rebellious nature too, because of, or enforced by, the surrounding environments and detrimental relationships with people.  It could also be just seeing things and being frustrated, knowing some certainties about life (like death and hopelessness).   Overall, quality stuff here.  You have quite a smooth skillset.  Thanks for sharing!

Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. You always seem to nail the meanings of what I'm talking about. I'm glad you dig this write. Appreciate you.

DL  

You have a unique gift of capturing darkness and injustice in the neat and tidy way you do.  Easy to read, and see the direction you're going, as your rhymes unfold, and your vocabulary shines.

Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Shiloh. I do push the tempo myself when I read it back to myself, so you're not far off on that feeling. I'm so glad you liked this write. Appreciate you.

DL    

This started out about you? Your muse is taking you places you never knew you needed to be. Nicely done.

Yes it did. But through a quick edit it kinda changed to fit the narrative. I basically took out the pronouns that were in there. Anyways my muse is kinda all over the place most of the time. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Fia. It means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

DL    

Truth spoken indeed 💪👍🪬

Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.

DL  

Respect brother poet 💪🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

Respect you as well, brother. Thanks for the RL. Appreciate you.

DL  

Inspiring words is necessary to be able to encourage people to achieve that what they want that dream of true potential 😉🪬 SHAMAN 🪬

this is simply powerful. i can really relate to the feeling of being spread thin while trying to resist the pressure to conform. thank you for sharing this piece.

Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. It means a lot to me. Glad you could relate. Appreciate you.

DL  

Nothing ever bothers the status-quo
Except all of us unwilling to conform

if this is not political I dont know what is...

this is great

Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. I'm glad you liked it. Appreciate you.

DL