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My Pastime
When I see you hiding in a group.
Trying to convince me to,
Jump in the loop.
I feel like the forbidden fruit,
You'll never reach with all your troops.
Still I'm dangling, just to amuse.
Trying to convince me to,
Jump in the loop.
I feel like the forbidden fruit,
You'll never reach with all your troops.
Still I'm dangling, just to amuse.
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23rd Aug 2024 3:02pm
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23rd Aug 2024 4:59pm
Wow! Adventure playground springs to mind here. Yes, keep them hanging. 😉
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23rd Aug 2024 5:22pm
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Re. My Pastime
25th Aug 2024 5:45pm
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25th Aug 2024 5:52pm
Thanks! It's actually what I deal with at work. People trying to force me to be their friends but I just want to be alone and work by myself so i can think to myself. I don't really want friends. Guys don't seem to have any issue being left alone but girls do. Just the constant duality of life
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25th Aug 2024 10:01pm
From one loner to another, I feel you!
I pay attention to how they act publicly, not what they say privately. If the actions contradict, then you can bet 100% that they are speaking behind your back. Another thing my father taught me - if they're nice privately but act differently publicly ( distant, etc. ) they are not your friends. Learn that early, he said, and it will save you a ton of heartbreak.
I pay attention to how they act publicly, not what they say privately. If the actions contradict, then you can bet 100% that they are speaking behind your back. Another thing my father taught me - if they're nice privately but act differently publicly ( distant, etc. ) they are not your friends. Learn that early, he said, and it will save you a ton of heartbreak.
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26th Aug 2024 00:04am
Hahaha naw they are outwardly fake right infront of you. It's crazy like they think it's intimidating but it really just looks stupid like why would I be your friend? Loll
Re. My Pastime
27th Aug 2024 2:45pm
It's funny how they want you to do something but not willing to do it themselves. Nice poem.
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27th Aug 2024 2:58pm
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I have already commented here, but it looks like my pc sometimes becomes crazy, or may be my power went out, when i posted the comment..any way, you have a fine way to react my friend and to give back the right echo when the wrong call is heard. Thanks for sharing..Hamid
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28th Aug 2024 1:58am
That's a lovely comment. I appreciate you took the time to come back and write one. Thank you
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