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Adrift In Thought
eye am an Abstract needle
eavesdropping on an Analogue mind
listening to Mama Gaia
whispering the sweetest nothings into
Divine extravagance watching
streams of daydreams rainbow before my eyes
performing kaleidoscopic pirouettes
as Poppa Time rewinds kindred lines..knitting [K]new poems
inked in soulful hues upon transcendent clouds
eye become a still-life within the Muse
ultra-patient along my Journey
drifting my way back Home
eavesdropping on an Analogue mind
listening to Mama Gaia
whispering the sweetest nothings into
Divine extravagance watching
streams of daydreams rainbow before my eyes
performing kaleidoscopic pirouettes
as Poppa Time rewinds kindred lines..knitting [K]new poems
inked in soulful hues upon transcendent clouds
eye become a still-life within the Muse
ultra-patient along my Journey
drifting my way back Home
Published 21st Aug 2024
| Edited 22nd Aug 2024
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21st Aug 2024 5:56pm
We really appreciate any poem that plays on words, to freaking cool dude as always. Tight
21st Aug 2024 11:18pm
22nd Aug 2024 2:25am
Brilliantly penned. Dig this a lot. Into the list it goes. Appreciate you.
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22nd Aug 2024 5:05am
24th Aug 2024 8:34am
24th Aug 2024 11:34am
Amazing last line to a beautiful piece. Lovely to see Mama Gaia, it fits your ink :-)
27th Aug 2024 2:54am
We need more male writers with your precision writing in here.
At least we have you, sir. Top shelf consistently.
This write is proof. Well done.
At least we have you, sir. Top shelf consistently.
This write is proof. Well done.
16th Sep 2024 10:10pm
