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Summer
The earth felt massive yet motionless.
When my heart twists and hurts lie.
But clouds in secret shapes still crawl bye.
Some in a wispy angel divine.
Hard flapping at the feeder.
The smaller the bird,
the more voracious an eater.
We should be devouring
all those little things, gloriously sweeter.
The brightest of sun rests her rays
silently knowing the stifling sorrow it slays.
We noticed the female cardinal has a scarlet head.
Decorated messengers from beyond the dead.
Is a bird's flight planned?
Like scurrying humans with list in hand.
The summer breezes of rapture,
my heart does capture.
A hint of what we were.
When my heart twists and hurts lie.
But clouds in secret shapes still crawl bye.
Some in a wispy angel divine.
Hard flapping at the feeder.
The smaller the bird,
the more voracious an eater.
We should be devouring
all those little things, gloriously sweeter.
The brightest of sun rests her rays
silently knowing the stifling sorrow it slays.
We noticed the female cardinal has a scarlet head.
Decorated messengers from beyond the dead.
Is a bird's flight planned?
Like scurrying humans with list in hand.
The summer breezes of rapture,
my heart does capture.
A hint of what we were.
Author's Note
Thoughts from a coherent moment with my mom who has dementia.
On our porch on a summer day.
On our porch on a summer day.
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Re. Summer
19th Aug 2024 8:47pm
hello beautiful Debbie I just wrote a poem about baby angel waiting to be born your poem made me think of it this is a very lovely poem 💕
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19th Aug 2024 8:52pm
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20th Aug 2024 1:38pm
Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 00:45am
Peaceful. A numbing, soothing experience that's captured beautifully in your poem & visual. Nice work!
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20th Aug 2024 1:39pm
Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 2:30am
Dear D,
Beautiful poem capturing a cherished moment. This piece reminds me of those muscle memories that occur when we least expect them. Lovely write. H🌷
Beautiful poem capturing a cherished moment. This piece reminds me of those muscle memories that occur when we least expect them. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 1:44pm
Hi, thank you. Someday these thoughts will be muscle memory or fond memories. ❤️
Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 5:16am
Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 1:44pm
Your poetry reflects literally your cool spirit, very zen and a self aware of what is going around as well.
Nice poem Debbie, stay happy, thriving and serenity over you for ever.
Nice poem Debbie, stay happy, thriving and serenity over you for ever.
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Re: Re. Summer
20th Aug 2024 1:51pm
Hi, I'm glad it comes across as zen because I'm soothing my anxiety to write it.
Thank you so very much.
Thank you so very much.
Re. Summer
21st Aug 2024 5:00pm
Re: Re. Summer
21st Aug 2024 6:55pm
Thank you. I just felt like piecing together all my thoughts, not really adhering to any theme.
I'm happy you liked it.
I'm happy you liked it.
Re. Summer
5th Sep 2024 3:29pm
Hello Debbie, como estas; very nice write, a pure pleasure to read... Take good care: Eddie
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5th Sep 2024 6:21pm