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Sweet Succulent

Devour my nectar.
Licking honey my heart drips.
My soul is whip cream.
deliabear
Written by deliabear (Debbie)
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Re. Sweet Succulent
12th Aug 2024 2:22pm
fanfuckingtastic! Love this!
Vision_of_insanity
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(Debbie)
12th Aug 2024 2:26pm
I wasn't sure about this one, lol -so that makes me feel really good
Thank YOU
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
(Fia Naturie)
12th Aug 2024 3:10pm
Yes!!! This is Hot. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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(Debbie)
12th Aug 2024 4:32pm
Thank you so very much! Xo
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
12th Aug 2024 3:21pm
Sprinkles... I need sprinkles... great job db...
LilDragonFly
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(Debbie)
12th Aug 2024 4:32pm
Absolutely sprinkles on that whipped cream soul. Thank you!
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
12th Aug 2024 4:33pm
It's, "A winner!"
adagio
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(Debbie)
12th Aug 2024 4:57pm
Aww. That's sweet thank you!
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
(Unveiling)
12th Aug 2024 5:01pm
beautifully sexy Debbie...
crimsin
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(Debbie)
12th Aug 2024 7:09pm
Awww. Thank you so much!
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
12th Aug 2024 9:50pm
Dang girl! Hawt!
Betty
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(Debbie)
13th Aug 2024 00:41am
Big smile. Thank you Betty!

Have a great night 🌙
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
(jimmy)
13th Aug 2024 00:59am
sensual and well done delia
goodwolf1966
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(Debbie)
13th Aug 2024 3:33pm
Thank you, means a lot to me
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
(Damian DeadLove)
13th Aug 2024 2:54am
Wonderfully done. Appreciate you.

DL
DamianDeadLove
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(Debbie)
13th Aug 2024 3:35pm
You are too kind. Thank you!
Appreciate your support.
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
Anonymous
13th Aug 2024 1:05pm
You lit an inferno with this little gem!
Anonymous
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(Debbie)
13th Aug 2024 3:36pm
Big smile 😊 🔥
I try, lol

Thank you so much.
deliabear
Re. Sweet Succulent
(sharad)
2nd Oct 2024 7:27am
Short crisp and lingering .
sharadejahan
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Re: Re. Sweet Succulent
(Debbie)
2nd Oct 2024 11:40am
Thank you so much!
deliabear

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