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in immature stage
i had sex at
the age of 17,
was emotionally attached
to someone,
when i found so called love
I lost my friend,
when I wanted to
make career I lost my love,
when I wanted to see
colorful dreams in a new sky,
drugs took hold of me,
when I wanted to leave 17
nd regret the past
depression gripped me
N by the age of 20,
life had taken many turns...
the age of 17,
was emotionally attached
to someone,
when i found so called love
I lost my friend,
when I wanted to
make career I lost my love,
when I wanted to see
colorful dreams in a new sky,
drugs took hold of me,
when I wanted to leave 17
nd regret the past
depression gripped me
N by the age of 20,
life had taken many turns...
Published 8th Aug 2024
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We experience life in translucent ways in our teens.
Adult emotions while still growing into ourselves.
You wanted to make something of your life with a good career. Sex and love are always to be had and a solid career will establish your identity.
You’re still on your way dimpy with much ahead of you.
Adult emotions while still growing into ourselves.
You wanted to make something of your life with a good career. Sex and love are always to be had and a solid career will establish your identity.
You’re still on your way dimpy with much ahead of you.
8th Aug 2024 4:56pm
you are right agree with you... and yes I am moving towards a good career, and now I have become stronger too... Thank you
Anonymous
9th Aug 2024 12:07pm
❤️ Wishing you a good future 😊
9th Aug 2024 12:13pm
8th Aug 2024 2:43pm
Life has taken me on trips I never ok'ed. 16 on seem to be the age of losing a prize called virginity. You fell in love with someone who did not accept you wanted more in life. That happens as well.
What you have going for you is a lesson that you've learned and youth.
This is so open. Love it.
Fia xoxo
What you have going for you is a lesson that you've learned and youth.
This is so open. Love it.
Fia xoxo
8th Aug 2024 4:59pm
i don't cry for anyone now, life has taught me a lot... N I am just living my life happily...thanks you fia for your kind comment n RL.. Much love❤
A sum up of the last 3 years of your teenage life. At least now you are older and readier I hope to enjoy both love and a career.
9th Aug 2024 2:29am
8th Aug 2024 8:40pm
We experienced different things while growing up. Now you have new good memories. Keep on writing.
9th Aug 2024 2:30am
8th Aug 2024 10:06pm
Life can be a battleground. You’re a warrior with the heart of an angel. Be you, dimpy. Always you.
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