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The Dark Moon
The moon has a dark side
…a harem of stars
to fuck every night;
surrounded by his concubines
he sucks up their light,
and glows with an
aura so saintly and white
thus, a naïve is fooled
with his deceptive sight
a vampire in disguise-
the moon has a dark side
…a harem of stars
to fuck every night;
surrounded by his concubines
he sucks up their light,
and glows with an
aura so saintly and white
thus, a naïve is fooled
with his deceptive sight
a vampire in disguise-
the moon has a dark side
Author's Note
I'm a selenophile but just exploring the dark side of the moon...
the poem may require some tweaking
the poem may require some tweaking
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Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 11:19am
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4th Aug 2024 11:33am
Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 1:23pm
Could be relatable to those who easily imagine the solitary moon surrounded by stars like a king with concubines.
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4th Aug 2024 1:32pm
Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 2:49pm
Hello, poetess.
I don’t think your poem needs tweaking at all.
It’s sensual and mysterious. Alluring in its darkness.
We don’t often look at the moon this way.
I really enjoyed this.
I don’t think your poem needs tweaking at all.
It’s sensual and mysterious. Alluring in its darkness.
We don’t often look at the moon this way.
I really enjoyed this.
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 3:14pm
Thanks a lot dear H❣️ I really appreciate your encouraging review and thanks for honouring me with the RL add 😊💐
Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 3:19pm
Nice poem, it is just like a vision... ...
The dark side of the moon is neither damaged nor spoiled...
... because gothic people are always working hard on it and caring for it.
... 😍👍
The dark side of the moon is neither damaged nor spoiled...
... because gothic people are always working hard on it and caring for it.
... 😍👍
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 3:21pm
Haha...I know....😊
Just another way to look at the moon :)
Thanks a lot for gracing my page with your presence n adding this piece to your reading list 💞
Just another way to look at the moon :)
Thanks a lot for gracing my page with your presence n adding this piece to your reading list 💞
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4th Aug 2024 11:26pm
Re. The Dark Moon
4th Aug 2024 4:59pm
I don't think I've ever seen this side of you! And so apropos as yesterday was the Dark Moon! Blessed New Moon to you today! xo
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4th Aug 2024 5:12pm
Yes, I don't write dark pieces....
But I'm bit exploring my imagination
I wasn't aware that yesterday was the dark moon . What a coincidence!
Blessed moon to you too, dearest Ahavati ❣️
But I'm bit exploring my imagination
I wasn't aware that yesterday was the dark moon . What a coincidence!
Blessed moon to you too, dearest Ahavati ❣️
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4th Aug 2024 5:15pm
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4th Aug 2024 5:16pm
Re. The Dark Moon
5th Aug 2024 9:57am
As do we all hehe.
Your poetry has always been a cut above. Great ink, friend 😁
Your poetry has always been a cut above. Great ink, friend 😁
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5th Aug 2024 10:29am
Yeah...haha
Wow! I'm all over the moon with your marvelous comment...thanks a bunch dear DC for the honour
Wow! I'm all over the moon with your marvelous comment...thanks a bunch dear DC for the honour
Re. The Dark Moon
7th Aug 2024 3:54pm
I stumbled across this and I’m glad I did. I think the concept was absolutely captured beautifully by the poem, the rhyme scheme was a delight as well. It read very smooth and flowing. I genuinely enjoyed it.
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
7th Aug 2024 4:06pm
Thanks a bunch for such a great review. I absolutely appreciate you reading this poem of mine. Thanks ☺️
Re. The Dark Moon
8th Aug 2024 5:17am
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I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for honouring me with the reading list add ❣️
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8th Aug 2024 8:26pm
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8th Aug 2024 10:22pm
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9th Aug 2024 9:27pm
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10th Aug 2024 3:41pm
Re. The Dark Moon
9th Aug 2024 10:14pm
A beautiful poem by a beautiful lady. So glad to see you writing again. Hugs and love, Oral XOOX
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10th Aug 2024 3:52pm
Thanks fr your reply. Have a wonderful and WRITE day. Hugs and love, Oral
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Anonymous
17th Aug 2024 9:51pm
Naughty 😊👍
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Re. The Dark Moon
21st Aug 2024 9:02am
I agree moon doesn’t has its own light but it has the tendency of reflecting and enhancing the light it takes. Very smartly chosen words now when i will see the moon it will make me feel sensuous.
Deep regards for your thoughts.
Deep regards for your thoughts.
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
21st Aug 2024 5:42pm
Thank you so much for stopping by n leaving your thoughts on this piece. Very much appreciate it 😊
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23rd Aug 2024 6:09pm
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23rd Aug 2024 6:58pm
Re. The Dark Moon
24th Aug 2024 5:55pm
Hello InDreams, This was a good original write, very well written... take good care
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
24th Aug 2024 6:37pm
Thank you so much ,dear DW....your kind review means a lot to me. Thanks for the RL add too 🌹
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25th Aug 2024 7:24pm
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29th Aug 2024 8:05pm
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29th Aug 2024 8:08pm
Re. The Dark Moon
29th Aug 2024 8:25pm
You had 39 comments but now you have 40. I like even numbers on comments. On my second read I'd say this poem is just fine the way it is ...
BIG
BIG
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29th Aug 2024 8:26pm
Re. The Dark Moon
3rd Sep 2024 7:39pm
Great twist of conscious guile...Underling the secrets that poke at one. Thanks for your lines.
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Re: Re. The Dark Moon
10th Sep 2024 12:36pm
Thank you so much for gracing my page with your presence. Very much appreciate it ❤️
Re. The Dark Moon
21st Sep 2024 2:24pm
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21st Sep 2024 3:34pm
Yeah.....most of the people do have
Thanks a lot for exploring my work ,dear poet 🌹
Thanks a lot for exploring my work ,dear poet 🌹