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Your Version of Me

Perhaps if I became a shadow of your will,

A puppet on a string, lifeless and still,

Let you mold me to fit your frame,

For you see me as too weak,

Unable to make my own way.

You’d finally turn to look at me,

Grant me with your praise,

Tell me of your pride.
Written by Lilliputian
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go on and tell me more, about what i should do with my own self.
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