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Last Friday night
Pink cheeks
in the back of your car
as you change my clothes
from cotton to flesh
under the guise of
watching a
drive-through movie
You kiss my racing pulse,
undo the buttons
of my good-girl blouse,
and run your thumb
across the top
of my breasts
as I peel your jersey
from your strong back
trembling hands
and breath,
eyes open
a lost wish
I made
last spring
came true
with my palms
on your chest
and your name
a soft moan
on my mouth
The windows fog.
You wear my
body like a
second skin.
and when we
come down
you redress me
so I’m as marked
as yours
on the outside
as I am inside
and my lips graze
your chin
as you pull
your scent
over my head
trapping my hair
in the collar
I wrap my arms
around your neck
damp from movie watching
as your jersey
hangs to
the middle of my
still-trembling thighs
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Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 1:22am
I felt a chill reading this …. I think I need another layer of clothes on top of the clothes of flesh I wear …. This is a new one for me… loved it
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 2:11am
Hey, layers are stylist!
Also, it’s illegal to go outside in skin. Put your damn clothes on Sam!
Thank you. It was a good moment. I enjoyed writing it.
Also, it’s illegal to go outside in skin. Put your damn clothes on Sam!
Thank you. It was a good moment. I enjoyed writing it.
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 2:15am
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:01am
Dude. I feel like you never wear clothes around here.
If we had high school superlatives I’d vote you ‘most likely to be a nudist.’
Put some damn pants on! You can’t sit on my couch if you don’t wear pants! Damn it!
If we had high school superlatives I’d vote you ‘most likely to be a nudist.’
Put some damn pants on! You can’t sit on my couch if you don’t wear pants! Damn it!
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 1:34am
Hot damn! Weren’t drive-in movies the best! Thank you for that little snap shot of yours. Loved the pink cheeks.
down2dirt
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 2:12am
Omg, the best. They were mostly gone by the time
I could do bad things in a back seat, but I totally remember them. Love the nostalgia as of late.
Thanks for dropping by!
I could do bad things in a back seat, but I totally remember them. Love the nostalgia as of late.
Thanks for dropping by!
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:26am
Remember when covid erupted and the drive through was on the rise again. There was some getting a taste what their parents and grandparents had lived. The jumping out of the front seat and climbing into the back, maybe she has her aunt visiting and she agrees to eat popcorn out of your lap. Hahaha, steamy windows and all doors locked, as cars across the lot rock and roll producing their very own movies. Tight one Lady
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:28am
Hey Me! Dude, I’d forgotten about that. I never made it to the one a few towns over but damn, I wish I had
Thanks for adding to the memory. It’s strange that Covid years are now nostalgic.
Thanks again, my friend .
Thanks for adding to the memory. It’s strange that Covid years are now nostalgic.
Thanks again, my friend .
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:39am
Fortunately we still have more than a few operating here in the south, and families are loving them. They don't have to sneak in food and drinks anymore, lots of snacks are prepared at home or purchased elsewhere. They even manage to bring in a few alcoholic drinks. We recommend that you google your local area lots of these drive ins are still open.
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 4:05am
Holy shit! There is a drive in 1 hour and 17 minutes from me! The dream is alive!
Thanks Me. That was super cool, and I’m delighted by the new info!
Thanks Me. That was super cool, and I’m delighted by the new info!
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 4:19am
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 11:54am
What are you sayin, man? Huh? Insinuating I’m not a good girl?
I’m trying something NEW here, sweet and innocent and …. Ah fuck. You’re right.
I’ve never been innocent.
But the blouse is comfy!
I’m trying something NEW here, sweet and innocent and …. Ah fuck. You’re right.
I’ve never been innocent.
But the blouse is comfy!
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 1:03pm
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 6:35am
When the drive-in gets one driving for it....favourite chunk:
You wear my
body like a
second skin.
and when we
come down
you redress me
so I’m as marked
as yours
on the outside
as I am inside
You wear my
body like a
second skin.
and when we
come down
you redress me
so I’m as marked
as yours
on the outside
as I am inside
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 11:54am
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:24pm
Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:25pm
Ah, yes, blood pressure is delicious!
Thank you my dearest friend. I appreciate you.
Thank you my dearest friend. I appreciate you.
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 3:58pm
I really enjoy your tango with words.
You paint such vidid details in a way that is special and enjoyable.
Well done Betty👍🏻☺️♥️
Jackie xo
You paint such vidid details in a way that is special and enjoyable.
Well done Betty👍🏻☺️♥️
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 4:49pm
Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 5:51pm
Gotta love that passion that makes you forget how damn uncomfortable a backseat is! And wearing his jersey, oh yum.
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. Last Friday night
22nd Jul 2024 6:10pm
I know, right?! There’s something so sweet and hot and… easy to forget how uncomfortable back seats are…
Thank you darling! I appreciate you!
Thank you darling! I appreciate you!