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Just like that
It was over a large
Dunkin’ coffee
that I realized …
fuck
It happened.
It fucking happened
just like that
Just like that
we jumped off a cliff
into water so mountain-cold
that it sucked my breath
from my body
and stopped my heart
And just like that
you revived me on the shore,
a hand on my
waist as your
tongue traced
your name
in my mouth,
warm sun
on our skin
as I melted
to life
and just like that
I didn’t get
my clothes from the floor
to make an awkward
hookup exit
I stayed
I stayed
I stayed awake to
watch you sleep
and
the slow rise and fall
of your chest
syncopated my
dreams to your
inhalations
and I woke later
to your tender
lovemaking,
as passion-filled
and ravenous
as our crazy
furniture-wrecking
fucking
the night
before
but the hunger
felt different
in daylight
just like that
I touched your arm,
and laughed hysterically
at a joke you made
over a cup of coffee
as if your arm
were a rail to
a reality
I didn’t see
created
but it was
we were
and it is
just like that
Dunkin’ coffee
that I realized …
fuck
It happened.
It fucking happened
just like that
Just like that
we jumped off a cliff
into water so mountain-cold
that it sucked my breath
from my body
and stopped my heart
And just like that
you revived me on the shore,
a hand on my
waist as your
tongue traced
your name
in my mouth,
warm sun
on our skin
as I melted
to life
and just like that
I didn’t get
my clothes from the floor
to make an awkward
hookup exit
I stayed
I stayed
I stayed awake to
watch you sleep
and
the slow rise and fall
of your chest
syncopated my
dreams to your
inhalations
and I woke later
to your tender
lovemaking,
as passion-filled
and ravenous
as our crazy
furniture-wrecking
fucking
the night
before
but the hunger
felt different
in daylight
just like that
I touched your arm,
and laughed hysterically
at a joke you made
over a cup of coffee
as if your arm
were a rail to
a reality
I didn’t see
created
but it was
we were
and it is
just like that
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Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 12:05pm
The brilliance of spontaneity captured in verse, just like that. Loved it.
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Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 1:34pm
Very sweet.
"just like that
I touched your arm,
and laughed hysterically"
Love it Fia xoxo
"just like that
I touched your arm,
and laughed hysterically"
Love it Fia xoxo
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Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 2:59pm
And sometimes it is...just like that.
Excellent, Betty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Excellent, Betty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 5:40pm
Re: Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 6:17pm
Thank you. I am thrilled you noticed! I wanted to sigh into the ending — I love that tool — and sometimes shit I try works and sometimes it doesn’t. Thanks for letting me know it hit right!
Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 5:43pm
and just like that from near ending to new beginning. Beautifully stated.
Enjoyed’
down2dirt
Enjoyed’
down2dirt
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Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 6:10pm
Wow Betty. You have outdone yourself here. So many fav phrases.
And one of the greatest lines, concepts ever - as if your arm was the rail to a reality
I didn't see created.
And just like that, you are locked down on my reading list.
You write with blood, sweat and tears yet tender too, love reading your work.
And one of the greatest lines, concepts ever - as if your arm was the rail to a reality
I didn't see created.
And just like that, you are locked down on my reading list.
You write with blood, sweat and tears yet tender too, love reading your work.
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Re: Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 6:16pm
Oh D-Bear, I love your face, girl, and the rest of you. I try.
I’m grandly inspired to do better. Thank you for noticing.
Re: Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 8:10pm
Thank you 😊
Your writing just keeps getting better.
I seriously wrote in my journal, I wish I could write like Betty. 💜
Your writing just keeps getting better.
I seriously wrote in my journal, I wish I could write like Betty. 💜
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Re: Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 8:30pm
Omg, D-Bear. What?!
Hey, all good things must end. I’m sure you’ll see the fall of Betty and then I can journal how much I want to write like you…
Hey, all good things must end. I’m sure you’ll see the fall of Betty and then I can journal how much I want to write like you…
Re. Just like that
22nd Jul 2024 7:25pm
Re. Just like that
23rd Jul 2024 4:02pm
There are so many things about this that resonate. The visuals & tactile metaphors are phenomenal. Just...damn...
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Re: Re. Just like that
23rd Jul 2024 4:59pm
Thank you for seeing those! I appreciate you so much WW!
Thanks again for the read and the rl!
Thanks again for the read and the rl!
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Re: Re. Just like that
25th Jul 2024 2:37am
That is one of my favorite ‘Betty’ songs. Made better because of Chevy Chase.
Thank you, you magical beasty! I appreciate it!
Thank you, you magical beasty! I appreciate it!