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Kyoto

Her defenses,

And robe,

Fell

Like

Cherry blossoms

In Kyoto

tell_me_wy

Written by tell_me_wy

Published 21st Jul 2024

Author's Note

10 words

#erotic #lover #sensual #spring

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Re. Kyoto

21st Jul 2024 2:44am

This is fucking brilliant, thank you for bringing back sensuality!

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21st Jul 2024 2:48am

Thank you very kindly. I try toying with 10-words to see how much I can make of them. Very gracious of you ^^

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Re. Kyoto

Her

21st Jul 2024 2:50am

Romantic, sensual, swoon-worthy�
All wrapped up in ten perfect words.

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21st Jul 2024 2:53am

Thank you :) Still trying to say a lot with just a little

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Her

21st Jul 2024 2:53am

You�re doing very well :)

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21st Jul 2024 2:54am

Thank you again ^^

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Re. Kyoto

21st Jul 2024 3:52am

Immediate impact. Beautiful.

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21st Jul 2024 3:56am

Thank you very much :)

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