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Found words in (her) pleasure - blackout poem

 
There’s just something  
         perfect.  
         beautiful.  
         life-giving.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
       about.  
                                  you  
 
 
 
 
I’m willing  
 
                      to do it right.  
 
 
 
 
 
   your lips  
 
 
 
 
 
    kiss me    
                    
 
          tongue  
 
Artful  
Purposeful  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I  
 
 
 
 
a   m  
 
 
  vulnerable  
 
 
                          your soft  
                               lips  
 
 
   an aphrodisiac.  
I can’t get enough.  
 
 
 
 
                                        your  
                                   mouth  
 
 
 
 
           caressing  
 
 
My  
     skin.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I’m  
    committed  
           baby  
 
 
 
I need you.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                             my lover  
Don’t hold back  
I will not  
 
 
 
 
You’re        so close  
                                            to  
                           m  e  
 
   I  
 
 
   can’t hold back anymore.  
 
I  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
love  
You  
 
 
 
 
     we  
              relax  
 
 
  I peer lovingly    
At  
     you  
 
 
Enjoying  
                              you.  
 
I  
 
 smile  
 
 
 
 
Surprised at what I’m doing.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
you        open yourself  
Inviting me  
Deep inside  
 
 
  my love  
How can I resist  
 
 
Written by Betty
Published | Edited 19th Jul 2024
Author's Note
For the blackout poem contest. 98 words in the body.

Blackout poem using ‘Her Pleasure’ by MidnightEagle as the base

Full poem here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/516419-her-pleasure/

Used with permission.

Blackout poetry comp here: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12860/#585916
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