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Oralympics
Once you are told you are talented with your tongue
It makes you wonder who you have to take down
to become #1
The saying the darker the Berry the sweeter the juice
I say the depth you are buried
Make you cry out in sounds that are obtuse
I trained with the best of them
I've trained with the worst
With all this training
It never quenched my thirst
Some like it shallow
Some like it deep as fuck
Some like to watch
They all like to buck
For those you have just started
Here is a tip
Careful of the teeth
The back of your head they will grip
Looking for the gold
I see that line
I just need to get that one
At the finish line.
It makes you wonder who you have to take down
to become #1
The saying the darker the Berry the sweeter the juice
I say the depth you are buried
Make you cry out in sounds that are obtuse
I trained with the best of them
I've trained with the worst
With all this training
It never quenched my thirst
Some like it shallow
Some like it deep as fuck
Some like to watch
They all like to buck
For those you have just started
Here is a tip
Careful of the teeth
The back of your head they will grip
Looking for the gold
I see that line
I just need to get that one
At the finish line.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 11th Jul 2024
Author's Note
For the oral competition
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Re. Oralympics
11th Jul 2024 8:10pm
Re. Oralympics
11th Jul 2024 8:11pm
Favourite lines, for rhyme gem:
The saying the darker the Berry the sweeter the juice
I say the depth you are buried
Make you cry out in sounds that are obtuse
The saying the darker the Berry the sweeter the juice
I say the depth you are buried
Make you cry out in sounds that are obtuse
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11th Jul 2024 9:03pm
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12th Jul 2024 6:00am
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Re. Oralympics
12th Jul 2024 12:43pm
Those first three lines are epic, drew me in immediately.
As someone with oral fixation I should have a look at that comp.
As someone with oral fixation I should have a look at that comp.
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Re: Re. Oralympics
12th Jul 2024 12:45pm
Re. Oralympics
5th Aug 2024 3:42pm
I just hope you don't have to wait every four years to get a chance of a deserved Gold!
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5th Aug 2024 3:48pm