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Robbing Eyes
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Robbing Eyes
Deep blue robbing eyes.
Stealing my dark denials.
Dismantle my truth.
Written by
deliabear
(Debbie)
Published
25th Jun 2024
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#haiku
#secrets
#TruthOfLife
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Re. Robbing Eyes
Vision_of_insanity
25th Jun 2024 8:41pm
Cool haiku. Do you have blue eyes?
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deliabear
(Debbie)
25th Jun 2024 8:44pm
a brown eyed girl
they look auburn in the sun like my hair.
Do you have "robbing" eyes? 😊
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Vision_of_insanity
25th Jun 2024 9:13pm
Very nice.
No. My eyes are hazel
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Betty
25th Jun 2024 9:37pm
I love that the eyes rob.
Beautiful piece my friend.
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deliabear
(Debbie)
25th Jun 2024 9:45pm
Will steal your soul if your not careful 😊
Thank you for beautiful comment.
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LilDragonFly
26th Jun 2024 6:42am
Such grand theft…
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deliabear
(Debbie)
26th Jun 2024 10:44am
Sure is. Thx for stopping bye!
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Connotation
5th Jul 2024 6:29am
Like you want to fall in love, but only out of honesty in seeing humility in self. innocently from your dream lover! Great twist added to the last line. You're doing good! Keep up the solid work!
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Re: Re. Robbing Eyes
deliabear
(Debbie)
5th Jul 2024 11:52am
Thank you!
Yup I do want honest love 😊
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