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Was Any Of It True?
It's been a whole year
yet you still sit on my 3rd rib to the right
dangling your feet
singing our favorite songs
I wish so badly for you to crack my rib
give me a reason to hurt
yet you still sit on my 3rd rib to the right
dangling your feet
singing our favorite songs
I wish so badly for you to crack my rib
give me a reason to hurt
Published 18th Jun 2024
Author's Note
I bought these two beautiful rings in Italy 2 years ago. They are silver and have hearts with black lava rock in them. I gave her one, and I wore mine every. single. day. I still have it. Seems I cannot let go of the past. But she is not who I remember. It's less of me wanting to love her again and become something, more of me wanting to alleviate the pain because I lost so many people, including her. All I want to know is why.
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18th Jun 2024 11:30am
18th Jun 2024 8:12pm
Well, I was gonna come in and write something that would hopefully brighten your mood a bit. However, I guess I do tend to overdo with the unsolicited advice.
So, Ill just say be patient. In time you will get what is meant for you.
So, Ill just say be patient. In time you will get what is meant for you.
18th Jun 2024 10:49pm
19th Jun 2024 00:36am
Ok as long as you're cool. I'm just mindful about not being overbearing. At which point, you'd probably just tune me out and any message that I share, no matter how good, would just be wasted words.
28th Jun 2024 8:43am
Asking why is like beating your head with a brick, honestly.
Cherish the good parts and the rest is a learning experience. You loved, that’s what matters.
Holding you in thought, my friend.
Cherish the good parts and the rest is a learning experience. You loved, that’s what matters.
Holding you in thought, my friend.
