Whooshing Dance

Dear D,

I really enjoyed the descriptive manner in which you create the sound of the trees. It was soothing and a bit of anxious at the same time. It made me think how ferocious nature can at the same time as calming. Lovely write. H🌷

Thank you so much. There was a ferocious breeze today. So I just watched
and listened to the trees. It was chaotic and calming at the same time, lol

I think people should do the whooshing dance with or without wine being involved.
Favorite line: Gusty, voluptuous velocity. That's some sexy personification.
As always, you write beautifully about nature.

😊 people should do the whooshing dance, lol.
Thanks so much for nice comments, they mean a lot.

Brilliant write. Love the imagery. Appreciate you.





DL

Thank you! I appreciate you always stopping bye.
Glad you enjoyed.

I enjoyed the imagery, it take stood out with your word choice

Hi! Thank you so very much

Fanfuckingtastic. The description of the trees with that image works perfectly. Great idea and concept for a poem. Well done!

Aww. Thank you so much. I wrote this sitting in a voracious breeze
watching and listening to the trees. Trees looked like they were dancing, lol

Need to disappear into a forest about now! What an incredible immersive poem!

Thank you, makes me feel so good to hear that. 😊

Those trees are very hypnotic, I must say! ✌

Hope it put you in a trance 😊
Thx for checking out!

This is so creative and unique. Master use of vivid imagery. Great poem!

Thank you! The breeze did all the work, lol I just watched and listened.
I appreciate you stopping bye!

My pleasure! You're always a joy to read!

Gotta love trees, especially trees doing the whooshing dance :-)

Wat an amazing piece this is, the imagery is fantastic.

Thanks so much. I wrote best about nature when I'm watching and listening to it unfold
It really was a whooshing dance 😊
Thanks for always supporting me!

Very original vocabulary, and way to express such a disposition as a profoundly executed personification of life.  We identify in the trees and nature, in general, as humankind.  It's great that you can go into such emotional detail as to predispose someone like me to "imagine" while I'm reading.  Anyway, again, good job.  Take care!

It makes me happy to hear, I made you imagine .I came up with this just from the whooshing sound of trees on a breezy day. Thanks so much for such nice comments