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Cry
Why do angles cry?
On angelic faces,
Leaving tracks behind.
Leaving traces,
On a wound,
That cannot heal.
From lashes of words,
Made from steel.
Why do the tears fall from grace?
Upon this fragile place.
Weeping and
Wallowing
From this ache.
Why does it feel like I am losing control?
This never-ending hurt.
Deep within my soul.
The pain of trying to speak.
Yet the words are unspoken.
Why do angels cry?
I’ll tell you why.
Because I----.
Cant.(whispered)
On angelic faces,
Leaving tracks behind.
Leaving traces,
On a wound,
That cannot heal.
From lashes of words,
Made from steel.
Why do the tears fall from grace?
Upon this fragile place.
Weeping and
Wallowing
From this ache.
Why does it feel like I am losing control?
This never-ending hurt.
Deep within my soul.
The pain of trying to speak.
Yet the words are unspoken.
Why do angels cry?
I’ll tell you why.
Because I----.
Cant.(whispered)
Author's Note
I wanted to post this because I feel that people think I can write only one thing. I am very aggressive and dominant, but I feel... Not sure how I feel. I'll leave it at that.;)
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Really enjoyed seeing this side of you Fia. Strong write. Thank you for sharing with us.
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2024 2:09pm
What a beautiful piece, dear Fia, it actually made me a bit speechless.
You're definitely a versatile poetess, not some "one trick pony" 💕
You're definitely a versatile poetess, not some "one trick pony" 💕
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2024 2:15pm
I'm certainly aware of your writing abilities which is why I always like reading your poems and commenting. I agree with all Duende mentioned. :)
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8th Jun 2024 4:33pm
This is the absolute best that we've read of your work, so many on this site should relate. Really tight work Lady
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8th Jun 2024 8:59pm
This one would work as another audio-visual poem, especially the whispered ending. Whether you can cry or not, I've heard it helps to. Great poem & thought provoking. 😥
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9th Jun 2024 9:11pm
I love how you reach out there with this one, girl. You have powerful insight, and the summation is fantastic.
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10th Jun 2024 11:35am
👏 👏 👏!! Extremely excellent queen 👸 beautiful ink spill your are very talented 👌
Please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
Please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
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