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Stardust
Water crashed
on the shore
in the silent
hours of the night,
you slumbered.
I came to you
as a whisper
birthed
from the moon’s
celestial glow.
Even though
you weren’t
searching,
you felt complete
with my presence.
on the shore
in the silent
hours of the night,
you slumbered.
I came to you
as a whisper
birthed
from the moon’s
celestial glow.
Even though
you weren’t
searching,
you felt complete
with my presence.
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Re. Stardust
1st Jun 2024 5:37am
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1st Jun 2024 3:09pm
Dreamy, and romantic piece of art, that reflects a sense of sympathy and telepathy.
Nice work.
Nice work.
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Re. Stardust
1st Jun 2024 10:21pm
Charmingly concise romantic verse you've shared. Thank you for giving me my hit of romanticism today 🌼
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6th Jun 2024 11:15pm
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2024 1:44am
Dreamy and celestial. Nice work.
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Re. Stardust
10th Jun 2024 1:28am
Very nicely done. like the break between stanza. Kept me in the moment. Fia xoxo
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Re. Stardust
12th Jun 2024 00:35am
What magic you created with only a few words. Smooth flow, well executed!
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Re. Stardust
22nd Jun 2024 6:54am
Coolly romantic. What you describe in the last verse is the kind of love I would be glad to find:
Even though
you weren’t
searching,
you felt complete
with my presence.
Even though
you weren’t
searching,
you felt complete
with my presence.
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Re. Stardust
26th Jun 2024 4:01am