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Blues Umbrella

You stole my sunshine.
Caught in your rainy weather.
Looking for shelter.
Verdonna
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LilDragonFly
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Re. Blues Umbrella
(Fia Naturie)
10th Jun 2024 3:57pm
I know exactly what you mean. Nice haiku. Fia xoxo
fianaturie8
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Re: Re. Blues Umbrella
10th Jun 2024 4:08pm
Thank you.
Verdonna
Re. Blues Umbrella
10th Jun 2024 5:31pm
Excellent...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. Blues Umbrella
10th Jun 2024 7:09pm
Thank you.
Verdonna
Re. Blues Umbrella
12th Jun 2024 00:29am
Excellent. Perfectly executed.
Vision_of_insanity
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Re: Re. Blues Umbrella
13th Jun 2024 1:09am
Thank you.
Verdonna
Re. Blues Umbrella
(Leo)
12th Jun 2024 6:03pm
Shelter, get out of the Helter Skelter.

Enjoyed the Haiku
DaVinci_07
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Re: Re. Blues Umbrella
13th Jun 2024 1:11am
In transition to getting my sunny days back.  Thank you.
Verdonna
Re. Blues Umbrella
(Francisco J Vera)
26th Jun 2024 4:32am
You find love again when you least expect it.  Keep on writing my sexy lady.
Phantom2426
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Re: Re. Blues Umbrella
27th Jun 2024 10:08am
Thank you.
Verdonna

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