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Playing The Card
I can clean up well.
Eat your heart out,
though it’s just a shell.
You don’t have clout
here to use as currency.
I am beyond you.
Stop calling me with urgency.
It wasn’t me who blew
our relationship to smithereens.
I outran your lies
and became a queen.
I no longer cry.
Eat your heart out,
though it’s just a shell.
You don’t have clout
here to use as currency.
I am beyond you.
Stop calling me with urgency.
It wasn’t me who blew
our relationship to smithereens.
I outran your lies
and became a queen.
I no longer cry.
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Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 12:09pm
Yes, QUEEN!
I love the strength in this. Knowing your self worth, especially after heartache is so empowering.
I love the strength in this. Knowing your self worth, especially after heartache is so empowering.
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Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 12:26pm
Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 5:14pm
Dear V,
I really enjoyed and appreciated this write. Those moments of clarity and strength speak volumes to moving forward for me, and this poem supports that fabulously. Awesome writing.
H🌷
I really enjoyed and appreciated this write. Those moments of clarity and strength speak volumes to moving forward for me, and this poem supports that fabulously. Awesome writing.
H🌷
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Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 5:59pm
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29th May 2024 7:17pm
Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 7:11pm
Well, a mic drop on this one. Digging the words and the image is spot on. I like how you concluded them poem.
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Re. Playing The Card
29th May 2024 7:17pm
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29th May 2024 7:18pm
Re. Playing The Card
6th Jun 2024 3:42pm
This was a really grand expression. Who called it a mic drop? Absolutely.
Showing the growth after a break instead of defeat is a power move and you wrote it with panache
Showing the growth after a break instead of defeat is a power move and you wrote it with panache
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Re. Playing The Card
6th Jun 2024 11:21pm
Brilliant ink. Love the flow. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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