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Space Bound
I am gifted
to your darkness
pale in the star shadow galaxy
with comet speed
I fizzle
a lightless stone,
you and your universe carry me
weightless
soundless
motionless
draped in your planetary arms
your Saturn rings
your angelic cosmic halo
Heaven’s ambassador
This War
these blistering meteors
these molten tears…
shall I ever feel anything
but heat?
how long will you hold me
your willing prisoner
slave to your needs
servant of desires
I hand myself over
shackled wrists
naked want
glistening anticipation
throbbing, pulsing
a beating heart
a tiny bead
the softest opening
my scent is confession
my blush is surrender
your hands and your lips
my welcome bondage
Author's Note
Love's Final Frontier
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Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 00:07am
This is awesome. The inventive, sci-fi imagery added a whimsical tone to your intensely erotic but not vulgar words. I could almost feel my heartbeat rise. Well done!
Mundus
Mundus
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Re: Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 3:19am
Wow, thank you! So, yeah - I can be vulgar as charged, but once in a while there's this...
I'm glad you like it. I like giving you tachycardia. Thanks for reading, Mundus!
I'm glad you like it. I like giving you tachycardia. Thanks for reading, Mundus!
Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 00:43am
Seemless lust and magnificent desire ...
How well you proclaim your submission..
LUSH LIKE
How well you proclaim your submission..
LUSH LIKE
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28th May 2024 3:22am
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28th May 2024 3:35am
I’m still trying to catch my breath from the visual on
“ Dark Thrill at the Capital Grille” …
“ Dark Thrill at the Capital Grille” …
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Re: Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 3:55am
Oh yeah? You need to look around more when you go out to eat, don't you! Never know. I might be sitting across from you and make you choke on your Chardonay.
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28th May 2024 3:57am
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29th May 2024 5:15am
Oh, I don't think so, PS. I haven't even started to reveal those.
But, I love your set ups.
But, I love your set ups.
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29th May 2024 11:10am
Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 1:09am
I’ve always loved you space bound… then again I’ve always been bound by your love and space
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Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 2:47am
Your poetry always seems to turn my head. Beam me up DampKitten!
Loved the final stanza in particular!
Loved the final stanza in particular!
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Re: Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 3:27am
Beam you up? What makes you think I'm up?
I'm making this movie in the basement, so get your ass over here.
I'm making this movie in the basement, so get your ass over here.
Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 3:07am
It feels like the captor is uniquely empowered to also be crucial in the pursuit of freedom?
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Re: Re. Space Bound
28th May 2024 3:31am
That's pretty amazing insight, Jazz. I was shooting for more of an 'emotional' bondage, but the stars and the sky may have overshadowed the deeper essence. I'm glad you picked that up, though.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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