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Kraken
You have released
the Kraken.
The mighty eye opens,
thrusting to the swelling surface.
I come for you in waves,
fists strapped to the starboard bow.
Your tentacles are draped
like twisted sea dreads
swaying across your varnished shoulders.
I am the captain’s daughter.
You are the mutiny of FUCK,
painted and tainted with exotic tattoos,
canon balls crashing
against my soft ocean innocence.
I am the salty, white foam
and the shackled brown curls.
You are the rage
of maritime tempest.
Daddy’s never seen
his little girl
ride a seahorse so hard
though I warned him
straight up
about the riptide.
Published 15th May 2024
Author's Note
Make me your prisoner..
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15th May 2024 11:42pm
I find it kind of refreshing to see you didn't mention waves of orgasms anywhere. It would have been worn and predictable.
Nice one, Meg.
Nice one, Meg.
15th May 2024 11:45pm
16th May 2024 00:09am
Billy's gonna be predictable though. When I read your line: 'Your tentacles are draped' I misread it initially as 'testicles'. I enjoyed reading of this loss of innocence though, much to Daddy's disapproval, I'm sure or shore... maybe? 🤣
16th May 2024 2:38am
16th May 2024 00:21am
—Bang!
I am the salty, white foam
and the shackled brown curls.
You are the rage
of maritime tempest.
Loves this stanza especially Maritime Tempest fucking brilliant!
Then again this is oozing with visual impact too!
Daddy’s never seen
his little girl
ride a seahorse so hard
though I warned him
straight up
about the riptide.
Jackie ☺️
Listed
I am the salty, white foam
and the shackled brown curls.
You are the rage
of maritime tempest.
Loves this stanza especially Maritime Tempest fucking brilliant!
Then again this is oozing with visual impact too!
Daddy’s never seen
his little girl
ride a seahorse so hard
though I warned him
straight up
about the riptide.
Jackie ☺️
Listed
16th May 2024 2:36am
Jackie, thanks so much for that! Love to see what you liked the most! Thanks for reading this!
Meg
xoxo
Meg
xoxo
16th May 2024 1:55am
This is funny
"Daddy’s never seen
his little girl
ride a seahorse so hard"
Loved it. Fia xoxo
"Daddy’s never seen
his little girl
ride a seahorse so hard"
Loved it. Fia xoxo
16th May 2024 2:34am
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16th May 2024 10:02am
Poetic comment:
"The kraken wakes,
his lust thirst slakes
with the mermaid
land renegade."
"The kraken wakes,
his lust thirst slakes
with the mermaid
land renegade."
16th May 2024 5:06pm
16th May 2024 7:45pm
I was caught up in the poem's repertoire invoking mythical sea creatures. (The first line was inspired by an actual book title.) I have never met a real life mermaid, your question reminds me of women who claim to have enjoyed sex with space aliens.
17th May 2024 3:21am
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