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Oroblanco
will you grape
me on a date
finger my lime
rock my melon
may pop my
cherry choke
my berry pear
my nectarine
star my fruit
gonna jocote
your avocado
babaco your
charichuelo
tangelo your
guanabana
pomelo your
pomegranate
oroblanco your
grumolo kiwano
your kiwi apple
your cocky lulo
your clementine
me on a date
finger my lime
rock my melon
may pop my
cherry choke
my berry pear
my nectarine
star my fruit
gonna jocote
your avocado
babaco your
charichuelo
tangelo your
guanabana
pomelo your
pomegranate
oroblanco your
grumolo kiwano
your kiwi apple
your cocky lulo
your clementine
Published 13th May 2024
Author's Note
Wise advice: eat your fruits.
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13th May 2024 2:02pm
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13th May 2024 2:20pm
This had big smiles on my face.
A guy asked one time when I was working what I would like, and I said a "I would love to pop a Cherry Coke" Very nice Duende. Fia xoxo
A guy asked one time when I was working what I would like, and I said a "I would love to pop a Cherry Coke" Very nice Duende. Fia xoxo
14th May 2024 5:36am
It's great when a write brings back memories, isn't it? I would have loved to see the look on his face. Thanks heaps for your comment and your story, Fia 💕
13th May 2024 3:00pm
Strawberries, blueberries, blackberries, raspberries every morning for this rogue …
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14th May 2024 5:36am
So that's what keeps you young? Berries are the best :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment and the BIG LIKE, PoetSpeak.
Thanks heaps for your comment and the BIG LIKE, PoetSpeak.
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13th May 2024 9:26pm
Fabulous alliteration not to mention the amazing allusions and imagery. Succinct and deliciously sexy. Sweet
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Anonymous
14th May 2024 6:42am
Clever, clever , clever you...
I'm so diggin this Duende!!
I'm so diggin this Duende!!
14th May 2024 7:28am
Oh, the smiles your comment gives me :-D
Thank you, thank you, thank you for digging this.
Thank you, thank you, thank you for digging this.
