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Many
Please look around you
Everything made in this world
Is made by hundreds
We think we are one
When in fact we are millions
Making this one world
A word is not one
It is made of few letters
To make just one word
Rejoice every day
Knowing you are not a word
You’re one of many
This is (A 5-7-5 haiku) not one but many
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Re. Many
5th May 2024 3:10pm
This is very nice. I like the 5-7-5 style you are using.
This is favorite that had me snapping my fingers in agreement
"We think we are one
When in fact we are millions
Making this one world"
Fia xoxo
This is favorite that had me snapping my fingers in agreement
"We think we are one
When in fact we are millions
Making this one world"
Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. Many
5th May 2024 3:16pm
Woke up this morning feeling upbeat .. ok I had sex… so might be the reason… but I’m glad you liked it…
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5th May 2024 3:18pm
Re. Many
5th May 2024 3:36pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 work sam I truly agree we are more than 1!! More like in a million as the late great aliyah would say!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re: Re. Many
5th May 2024 3:38pm
We should remember this everyday we wake up… we are not alone… we are not one… we are many
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Re: Re. Many
5th May 2024 4:31pm
You know me DB I don’t follow rules … but I hope you enjoyed this un haiku poem.. thank you for your comment
Re: Re. Many
6th May 2024 00:35am
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Digging takes a lot work you know. I had to get the shovel, some mud boots, mosquito repellant, a nice cold drink... under this hot ass weather. Yeah... I dug it, lol.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Many
6th May 2024 00:53am
I’m so sorry I made you dig all that .. next time I’ll make it up to you …. Just don’t hit me with that shovel
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13th May 2024 00:59am
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13th May 2024 2:07am
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Re. Many
13th May 2024 00:58am
The content is very interesting. I was just discussing a theory today about the original spelling and pronunciation of words being altered so their power couldn't be used through speaking them. Words are, after all, a spell.
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Re: Re. Many
13th May 2024 1:02am
That’s a very dangerous idea…just imagine when words are not understood anymore… this will be the end of the world
Re: Re. Many
13th May 2024 1:09am
Not at all. It's an actual ancient theory that the 'powers-that-be' put into effect to control the populous. There will always be words and languages we're taught to understand one another. The point of this theory is that what we're taught, how we're taught, is not the truth.
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Re: Re. Many
13th May 2024 1:12am
So you’re telling me everything I’ve been learning is not true…
No wonder I’ve been taking Ds and Fs all through high school and college.
No wonder I’ve been taking Ds and Fs all through high school and college.
Re: Re. Many
13th May 2024 1:32am
LOL! No; I am not telling you anything. I was merely repeating a theory I was discussing with someone about the difference in ancient texts ( words ) and current words and their subsequent definitions.
I seriously doubt that's what's causing your Ds and Fs! We're all taught in the language of our environment: English, German, Spanish, French, and so forth. It's only when we expand our capabilities into other languages that we begin to realize just how much has been revised instead of translated.
I seriously doubt that's what's causing your Ds and Fs! We're all taught in the language of our environment: English, German, Spanish, French, and so forth. It's only when we expand our capabilities into other languages that we begin to realize just how much has been revised instead of translated.
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