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unwelcomed heat
the heat
today
sneaking
its way
into raised
windows,
pushing
itself
over the
carpets,
up against
the walls,
ceilings,
staying
like it
was a
distant
relative
that comes
to visit
unwelcomed.
today
sneaking
its way
into raised
windows,
pushing
itself
over the
carpets,
up against
the walls,
ceilings,
staying
like it
was a
distant
relative
that comes
to visit
unwelcomed.
Published 4th May 2024
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4th May 2024 11:55am
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4th May 2024 12:59pm
thank you delia. funny though, i posted this today and then it rained.
Anonymous
4th May 2024 2:18pm
Excellent.
4th May 2024 3:59pm
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4th May 2024 4:00pm
4th May 2024 4:18pm
I also liked reference to the relatives.
I also felt the little grump behind those words!
Haha,
♡
I also felt the little grump behind those words!
Haha,
♡
4th May 2024 4:24pm
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5th May 2024 00:42am
