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I have good intentions

Today is the day
I'm going to ask her out
Chickened out again
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 11:28am
Nicely done... the last line jolts... build up... twist...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 11:35am
Thanks LDF
Vision_of_insanity
Re. I have good intentions
(Debbie)
30th Apr 2024 12:11pm
I like this one, reminds me of crush's in youth.
Nice haiku!
deliabear
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 1:35pm
Thank you, as always!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. I have good intentions
- Edited 30th Apr 2024 3:42pm
30th Apr 2024 3:40pm
Probably for the best. The easiest way to avoid a calamitous journey is to never start it.
The_Darkness_Insid
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 3:41pm
Good point. Thanks for reading & commenting
Vision_of_insanity
Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 7:03pm
Fuck that. Make like Nike and just do it!!
Thor_Azine
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 9:07pm
Some can, some can't. Thanks for reading & commenting.
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 9:10pm
I believe in you bro!!
Thor_Azine
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 9:11pm
Thank you my friend.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. I have good intentions
(Princess Alia)
30th Apr 2024 10:07pm
I know the feeling. Love is such a hard feeling to navigate..

Interested in reading more :)
DarkPopPrincess
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
30th Apr 2024 10:11pm
Thank you my friend. Appreciate it
Vision_of_insanity
Re. I have good intentions
1st May 2024 5:29am
Dear V,

I would have said yes, if only you’d have asked. Alas…
A very relatable write for sure. H🌷
Honoria
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Re: Re. I have good intentions
1st May 2024 10:50am
Thank you Honoria. Appreciate the kind words.
Vision_of_insanity

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