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youthful flower
if i
cry like
the dawn,
where we
will find
pleasures,
a joy
in delight
that charms
the air,
and in
love's tender
poise,
let not
one petal
of her
flower
be seen
to fade
or wilt.
cry like
the dawn,
where we
will find
pleasures,
a joy
in delight
that charms
the air,
and in
love's tender
poise,
let not
one petal
of her
flower
be seen
to fade
or wilt.
Published 30th Apr 2024
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30th Apr 2024 10:15am
30th Apr 2024 10:17am
thank you Lil for the read, your comments and adding my poem to your RL.
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1st May 2024 5:33am
Dear J,
Your pen has a bottomless amount of beauty that pours forth. I enjoyed every word of this piece and your ability to incorporate nature and the aging process as a metaphor. Lovely.
H🌷
Your pen has a bottomless amount of beauty that pours forth. I enjoyed every word of this piece and your ability to incorporate nature and the aging process as a metaphor. Lovely.
H🌷
1st May 2024 9:02am
Anonymous
1st May 2024 9:41pm
An eternal bloom of love is always the hope
1st May 2024 10:33pm
Anonymous
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