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it has rained (heavy here)
it has
rained heavy
here, like
little stones
at
my windows,
i will
keep myself
boarded up,
protecting
myself, finding
a comfortable
space,
and remind
myself
there is
still
some great
beauty
even during
bad storms.
rained heavy
here, like
little stones
at
my windows,
i will
keep myself
boarded up,
protecting
myself, finding
a comfortable
space,
and remind
myself
there is
still
some great
beauty
even during
bad storms.
Published 22nd Apr 2024
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22nd Apr 2024 5:16am
It rained here as well… for the life of me I could not find that great beauty your talking about
22nd Apr 2024 5:30am
thank you Samnash, i'm sorry you did not experience the beauty of a storm.
22nd Apr 2024 5:33am
22nd Apr 2024 5:20am
im sorry Wolf you are a good writer this reminded me of the itsy bitsy spider for some odd reason...
thank you crimsin, as long as these poems promote thoughts or feelings, i'm ok
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22nd Apr 2024 12:09pm
Indeed, there is beauty even in a storm. I get it! The only bad part is when it's a heavy rain the yards get too wet and roads flood here! Quite the lovely poem you've got here. I dig it!
22nd Apr 2024 12:12pm
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