Aching through Eternity

Hello Debbie, how are you; Really digged this write man... completely made sense for me... Take good care: deadwolf

Thank you. I dig your comment. 😊

Have a goodnight!

This is very good.  Very evocative of a visual depiction of emotion and feeling.  I like the analogies you used, and the language to speak of both want and need, as well as the contrast and comparison of being full and empty on an emotional scale.  You're really doing quite well in mixing all of the tangibles of a good artist.  Again, impressive.  Keeping putting work in, and let inspiration be stirred up within you!

Thank you. Your comments made me feel sparkling good.
I really appreciate your feedback, helps inspire me.

This write struggled to be born, it kind of all came together
with a mind of it's own, lol.

Have a relaxing night filled with creativity

"I acutely ache for the return of me."

The worst part of it all is how much of yourself you really lose in the exchange. There is a cost to everything. Every. Fucking. Thing. And after you've paid normalcy is redirected.

I don't think the old version exists save as a memory, and the mourning, the understanding and the burial of past selves that we really liked sucks ass. There are totally moments when I looked up and thought "I was so much better before him/her/this."

As always, lovely natural interlay.

Hi Betty, thanks for checking out and comments.
Have a magical night.

Brilliantly worded, thought provoked, wonderfully executed! Your a phenomenal writer!

Aww. Thank you.
Makes me happy you liked it. 😊

You had me at the title, girl
And the poem didn’t disappoint,
I’m with them. You’re phenomenal.

Thank you girl! It makes me very happy you liked it. ❤️

❤️

This was a solid write. As good as this poem was I appreciate the photo just as much.

Hi Michael. I was trying to find a pic to depict ache. That is actually a pic of pain fibers, I thought it was haunting.
Thank you for stopping bye!

A philosophical masterpiece
full of paradoxical verbiage

Luvin this!!

Naaj

Hello! I love me a good paradox, lol

Thank you for such nice comments.
Made me smile.
Find magic in your night ✨

Oh yeah! This is very good Debbie.

I love your comments, thank you kindly.