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not much going on here
there is nothing
in my hands as
the hills of Rome
burn
there is nothing
in my eyes as
the panther stalks
the antelope
there is nothing in
my mind as love
is given last rites
and sent to hell
there is nothing
in my heart as
birds flee in terror
from the coming
storm
there is nothing in
my soul as life murders
life
there is nothing
in my imagination
as I write this poem
at 5:08 a.m. early
Sunday morning
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Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 6:02am
don't give up beautiful Kitty people say things they don't mean like I will say I don't love someone only to save my heart because I know I will disappoint eventually burn a person out and opening up to them is bound to leave a soul scar...I am afraid of love don't you know of people being terrorized by my spirits who have done this before to me since childhood where was my option out then...I was placed into a pit and I still love who I can,,,
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Re: Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 8:06pm
You are right. We should love who we can, especially ourselves ( who I greatly love the most).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 6:02am
You’re joking… all this imagination and you say nothing on your mind….i don’t believe you
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Re: Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 8:14pm
Wish I could tell you different, but I really don't have much of an imagination, lol. I mostly write when I'm exhausted and there's nothing but word salad left on the plate of my mind, but thank you so much for believing otherwise. That's very kind of you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 6:07am
I'm sorry Robbie when I inadvertently hurt you... you are beautiful to me Kitty ❤️
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20th Apr 2024 11:03pm
Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 7:25am
Dear BK,
I liked this stream of conscientiousness. I kind of feel like the title is a bit of a pun and you actually do have a lot going on. 😊
For me, the representation of all the evils in the world can wreak havoc on a mind that wants to find the good. Intense write. H🌷
I liked this stream of conscientiousness. I kind of feel like the title is a bit of a pun and you actually do have a lot going on. 😊
For me, the representation of all the evils in the world can wreak havoc on a mind that wants to find the good. Intense write. H🌷
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Re: Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 11:07pm
it was indeed a stream of conscientious. Sometimes I don't even know what I'm writing about. When I'm finished and look at it I think, WTF was that all about! Lol.
Anyway, I appreciate the kind words.
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty.
Anyway, I appreciate the kind words.
biggest hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. not much going on here
20th Apr 2024 10:24am
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Re. not much going on here
23rd Jun 2024 9:58pm
Oh, the depth in this, and at those early hours, it's even more profound.
Great job.
Great job.
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24th Jun 2024 00:12am
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