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your kiss (senryu)

i accept the kiss  
you sowed into my garden  
watch if love will sprout
wolfatthedoor1966
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Samnash
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Re. your kiss (senryu)
Anonymous
19th Apr 2024 1:20pm
Tended with love & showered with hope...it should grow into a beautiful thing
Anonymous
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
19th Apr 2024 4:31pm
as long as it doesn't wilt on the vine. thank you Con
wolfatthedoor1966
Re. your kiss (senryu)
(Sam Nash)
19th Apr 2024 4:40pm
oo.. I loved this one.... im sure it will grow to become a very big tree
Samnash
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
19th Apr 2024 9:17pm
thank you Samnash for the read, comment and RL add.
wolfatthedoor1966
Re. your kiss (senryu)
19th Apr 2024 7:54pm
Aw this is sweet and tender.
nightbirdblue
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
19th Apr 2024 9:19pm
thank you bird
wolfatthedoor1966
Re. your kiss (senryu)
(Average Joe. AJ. Joe)
20th Apr 2024 00:13am
The dream of every life. Well said.
AverageJoe
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 1:44am
thank you AverageJoe
wolfatthedoor1966
Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
(Average Joe. AJ. Joe)
20th Apr 2024 1:48am
Your welcome
AverageJoe
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Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 1:44am
A sweet reminder of love.
Verdonna
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 1:56am
thank you Verdonna
wolfatthedoor1966
Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 2:03am
Sweet. Would love to see you write more in this format.
Pinkdreams
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 2:40am
thank you Pink, i may
wolfatthedoor1966
Re. your kiss (senryu)
20th Apr 2024 8:48pm
Short yet carries so much meaning and emotion. Love it
LillyRosa
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Re: Re. your kiss (senryu)
21st Apr 2024 5:41am
thank you LillyRosa
wolfatthedoor1966

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