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Afternoon Delight
Eyes closed
Deep inhale
A forgotten scent
A recalled memory
Brown eyes
Infused with heated desire
Slightly parted lips
A side smile.
Made it three steps
Door closed
Pulled back
Turned
Lifted
Back to the wall
Legs wrapped
Tongue dives deep
Clothing hinders
Abrupt parting
“Bed or couch?”
“What's close?”
Two questions
One mission
Clothes fall to the floor
Leaving a crumble path
The faster the movement
The higher the need
Legs lifted to shoulders
Pulsing lips ready to swallow
In
Stretch
Arched back
Rhythmic dance
To a bass drum
Tempo unbelievable
Ampt up orchestra
Ready for the classic
Clash of completion.
Then everything stops
Float in the in-between for a
Nanosecond and back
To reality.
Euphoric.
“See you tomorrow?”
Deep inhale
A forgotten scent
A recalled memory
Brown eyes
Infused with heated desire
Slightly parted lips
A side smile.
Made it three steps
Door closed
Pulled back
Turned
Lifted
Back to the wall
Legs wrapped
Tongue dives deep
Clothing hinders
Abrupt parting
“Bed or couch?”
“What's close?”
Two questions
One mission
Clothes fall to the floor
Leaving a crumble path
The faster the movement
The higher the need
Legs lifted to shoulders
Pulsing lips ready to swallow
In
Stretch
Arched back
Rhythmic dance
To a bass drum
Tempo unbelievable
Ampt up orchestra
Ready for the classic
Clash of completion.
Then everything stops
Float in the in-between for a
Nanosecond and back
To reality.
Euphoric.
“See you tomorrow?”
Author's Note
Do you remember getting or making that call for the first time? How you felt being on either side of the door. This is the first come over call I received.
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Re. Afternoon Delight
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19th Apr 2024 4:20am
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19th Apr 2024 4:29am
How many come over calls have you gotten??…. Sorry don’t answer that.. to much info…other than me being noisy… this is euphoric
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19th Apr 2024 11:36am
Thank you, Sam., I agree with you. too much information. (Laughing) Fia xoxo
Re. Afternoon Delight
Wow, what an enjoyment of answering that come over call, to be taken in so passionately. Favourite lines, for musical metaphors as climax approaches
Rhythmic dance
To a bass drum
Tempo unbelievable
Ampt up orchestra
Ready for the classic
Clash of completion.
Then everything stops
Float in the in-between for a
Nanosecond and back
To reality.
Euphoric.
Rhythmic dance
To a bass drum
Tempo unbelievable
Ampt up orchestra
Ready for the classic
Clash of completion.
Then everything stops
Float in the in-between for a
Nanosecond and back
To reality.
Euphoric.
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Re: Re. Afternoon Delight
Thank you Solomon. Did you notice that the bottom stanza shaped like a bell? This poem was meant to be. (smiling) Fia xoxo
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19th Apr 2024 8:06pm
Now I notice. Don't know if you have heard of the term "bell end" as a penile epithet (certainly is in English slang).
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