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Saw You Sit Naked In The Cool Water
When I saw you sit
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
naked in the cool water,
I felt the urge to
strip down and allow myself
to be eternally yours.
Published 16th Apr 2024
Author's Note
One guy is using this tanka poem to express how he felt after seeing something on a local beach.
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