Desire

Tight piece Lady, through this life and the next Rapunzel and her Prince Charming will surf the waves of time

Aww, thank you!!! 🥰

Very poetic.  The language used to depict the emotion, the principality in metaphor, and how you set course for the direction is superb.  It unfolds nicely the whole way through to get to the ending.  There's really no getting lost, despite the many instances of clever use of words.  Very vivid and lucid - clear and easy to read.  The give/take in some of your principalities and balances and dualities holds up, with need/want and sweet/sour and so on being an example.  That's always a good trait to have as a writer, especially when you're being philosophical or using morality - dual principality.  There's just something about finding a balance to the fine-tuned things in life that captures the mind.  Anyway, again, nice imagination and creativity, as per usual, ha-ha.  The metaphors toward the end are really solid too.  Well, thanks for sharing.  I'll see you around.

It makes sense to me; if it makes sense to you, it is all that matters. Good vibes.

Hi! I'm speechless, I didn't feel confident with this one at all, lol  
Thank you so so much for all the feedback.  
I like using dualities.  
Your feedback really does help me. I cannot gage those  
things myself.  
Your comments are more well written than the poem, haha  
Have a great night, thx for the uplift.  
( connotation)

Thank you my friend!  
I always feel like I did good when you like it.  

( Adagio)

is a captivating and evocative poem that beautifully portrays the intensity of longing and the complexities of love.  your poem is poignant and skillfully crafted.

Thank you so much for such nice comments, I really appreciate you reading

Have a peaceful night

Want and savant is about as apt as a rhyme gets.

Neatly done:)

Ha! Savant popped in my head, I had to use it whether it made sense or not, lol.

Thx for reading and nice comment, your opinion means alot

Makes perfect sense to me... well done db...

Thank you Lil, you always get me! 💜

Your poems are always magnificent. Well done!!

That is way too kind, but I'll take it, lol.
Thx for reading! 😊

Girl, I felt this in my bones.
I love this.

That might be the single best comment I've ever had.
You made my morning!
Thank you, I cherish my friends here

To make you smile just made my morning💕

💜❤️💜❤️

This is certainly dripping with desire, the romance pulls me in. Well penned!

I'm so happy it did!
Thx for stopping bye and your support. 😊