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Among the Ruins
Far away
Beyond the north winds
A pale autumn moon
Glows onto the ruins
Etched in stone
An unknown hand
Long forgotten
In the distant future
Eternal flame to the next of kin
Beyond the north winds
A pale autumn moon
Glows onto the ruins
Etched in stone
An unknown hand
Long forgotten
In the distant future
Eternal flame to the next of kin
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Re. Among the Ruins
31st Mar 2024 4:28pm
Is that an extraterrestrial bunny?
I really like this. It's just enough to set a strong tone for your message.
That really is a cool pic
I really like this. It's just enough to set a strong tone for your message.
That really is a cool pic
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Re: Re. Among the Ruins
31st Mar 2024 4:30pm
The bunny is fucked up looking. Found it online.
Glad you like this little poem. You rock Deb!
Glad you like this little poem. You rock Deb!
Re: Re. Among the Ruins
31st Mar 2024 4:32pm
Maybe you should write a tale of some fucked up drunk man who dress's up as the Easter bunny, lol 🤣🤣🤣
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Re: Re. Among the Ruins
31st Mar 2024 4:36pm
Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 4:02am
I can envision somewhat your depiction. I like the style and choice of language, and the topic as well. Kind of reminds me of an old horror novel or heavy metal band lyrics. Anyway, pretty cool. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 10:30am
Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 11:28am
I like that this poem plugs into many possible genres and ideas. It offers something to all readers and that is a poetic win.
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Re: Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 11:35am
Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 4:12pm
Enjoyed the imagery you’ve painted. Favorite lines -
“Etched in stone
An unknown hand
Long forgotten”
“Etched in stone
An unknown hand
Long forgotten”
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Re: Re. Among the Ruins
1st Apr 2024 7:47pm
Re. Among the Ruins
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