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Bloom
I breathe
softly as I can
upon
your slender neck;
You shiver
as a Springtime
cherry sapling,
loosing every
delicate blossom;
My orchard
holds
a single bloom;
My heart
is given
to you.
softly as I can
upon
your slender neck;
You shiver
as a Springtime
cherry sapling,
loosing every
delicate blossom;
My orchard
holds
a single bloom;
My heart
is given
to you.
Published 28th Mar 2024
Author's Note
I put this under Misc because it’s neither erotic nor do I think it falls under that category of the trials of love.
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29th Mar 2024 00:23am
Hi Tell-Me,
Hope ur well.
This is lovely.
I particularly like the rhythm within the spirit of the poem.
The tempo,Like the melody of a song.
I do enjoy a rhyme,or slant rhyme.
Take care.
X
Hope ur well.
This is lovely.
I particularly like the rhythm within the spirit of the poem.
The tempo,Like the melody of a song.
I do enjoy a rhyme,or slant rhyme.
Take care.
X
29th Mar 2024 11:29am
29th Mar 2024 1:34pm
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30th Mar 2024 1:58am
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