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Bloom

I breathe � � �
softly as I can � � �
upon
your slender neck;
� � �
You shiver
as a Springtime
cherry sapling,
loosing every � � �
delicate blossom; � � �
� � �
My orchard � � �
holds � � �
a single bloom; � � �
� � �
My heart � � �
is given � � �
to you.

Written by tell_me_wy

Published 28th Mar 2024

Author's Note

I put this under Misc because it�s neither erotic nor do I think it falls under that category of the trials of love.

#lover #sensual #spring #trees

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Re. Bloom

Anonymous

29th Mar 2024 00:23am

Hi Tell-Me,
Hope ur well.

This is lovely.
I particularly like the rhythm within the spirit of the poem.
The tempo,Like the melody of a song.

I do enjoy a rhyme,or slant rhyme.

Take care.
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