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(without fear or favour)
written in shared ink-stained dreams
shared where words dance in creative
woven tapestry of ethereal canvas
the unions of souls can be found
the whispered promises of love
entanglement in earthy passions
shared transcend the physical
as they are puffs of smoke
creative and heartfelt it may sound
they are born of mere words
for in deep underground
nothing is what they seem
surrender to the realm where poems reign
let us weave our tale verses entwine
creating a symphony of words
to create stories alphabets' love affair
touch of our minds both mad and divine
fire and ice spark our creative design
passion not in bodies intertwined
but in forging words unconfined
we find our refuge in this sacred place
our imaginations creating worlds, a sanctuary
the depths of our souls are unbound
each poem a love story
embraces or whispered sighs
flourishes as our creativity flies
our love-making lies
in the strokes of our pen.
written in shared ink-stained dreams
shared where words dance in creative
woven tapestry of ethereal canvas
the unions of souls can be found
the whispered promises of love
entanglement in earthy passions
shared transcend the physical
as they are puffs of smoke
creative and heartfelt it may sound
they are born of mere words
for in deep underground
nothing is what they seem
surrender to the realm where poems reign
let us weave our tale verses entwine
creating a symphony of words
to create stories alphabets' love affair
touch of our minds both mad and divine
fire and ice spark our creative design
passion not in bodies intertwined
but in forging words unconfined
we find our refuge in this sacred place
our imaginations creating worlds, a sanctuary
the depths of our souls are unbound
each poem a love story
embraces or whispered sighs
flourishes as our creativity flies
our love-making lies
in the strokes of our pen.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 27th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Just thinking about DU and how there are so many good poets here. Loving the interactions, everyone's so creative and talented.
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Re. Deep Underground Community
Indeed! Your words have captured the beauty of this very unique place. In it's own metaphoric way, it is akin to the Hotel California. "You can check out anytime you like but you can never leave....." 🤣🤣🤣. (And I don't think that I ever will). #mycreativesolstice
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27th Mar 2024 1:35pm
MrM, dear sir, you have been here with me so long too, its like we are neighbours, who talk sometimes but are always there. Too true...I won't check out too unless carried out:))
Thanks for the RL and thanks for reading:)
Thanks for the RL and thanks for reading:)
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27th Mar 2024 1:42pm
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27th Mar 2024 1:58pm
Lovely, Grace, especially the killer double-meaning in the final two lines. Well done.👍
I'll nominate it in the next PotM competition, if that's OK?
Much love💐
I'll nominate it in the next PotM competition, if that's OK?
Much love💐
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27th Mar 2024 2:17pm
Thank you Ajay for reading and commenting. Honoured indeed that you see it fit to enter into the Competition.:)
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27th Mar 2024 3:26pm
This is teeming with love and acceptance. Favorite lines:
“touch of our minds both mad and divine”
“our love-making lies
in the strokes of our pen”
This is a beautiful little world we’ve created across continents.
“touch of our minds both mad and divine”
“our love-making lies
in the strokes of our pen”
This is a beautiful little world we’ve created across continents.
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27th Mar 2024 3:37pm
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27th Mar 2024 3:37pm
Lol. I don't think your statement applies to me so much but what I will say is that yes, there is much talent here & we really can get wrapped up in & hang on to every word of it. I get wrapped up in my own poetry too, especially if I feel I'm working on something good. There is a magic to it all that is hard to explain but you have indeed made some inroads here, regarding that. 😊
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27th Mar 2024 3:43pm
Hi Billy:) you are a talented writer, I wish I can write like you. I like that poets like you are here, reading the poems written by the many and diverse talents here is awesome. I cant explain it, but I think you know what I mean.:)
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6th Apr 2024 2:07pm
What a beautiful tribute to this special place, and to the joy of not only writing, but SHARING poetry. For me, the act of creating is healing and mind-opening, but sending it out into the underground to connect with others is where the real magic lies. And reading other poets who seem to express my own thoughts better than I can... like you did in this poem! Wonderful.
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6th Apr 2024 7:46pm
Hi K, thank you for dropping by and reading me. Appreciated as always 🌹and also the RL Yes I love DU and all of you esteemed members, love the many and diverse poems, it's what makes us, Us😊
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4th May 2024 3:21pm
Amazing spill dear Grace. Those two last lines simply are the icing on the cake.
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