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His First
Lay down.
I do all the work.
Relax
Remove your shirt.
Mmmm
Nice, I want to lick
Give it a flick,
Of my tongue.
Watching you
Come undone.
Silken flesh
Smoooth.
Touch and caress.
Don’t fear me.
You waited so long.
Who would have thought.
I’d be your number one.
I’ll set the bar high.
No one can touch.
Open those thighs.
Breathing in your musk.
You tremble already?
We just begun.
You haven’t entered yet.
And you are sprung.
Let me drink you.
Taste that drop.
On the tip of my tongue,
Like a lollipop.
It is time ,
For me to climb.
Pushing you in,
Watching you sin.
As I take,
What you freely give.
No regrets.
It’s time to live.
I felt you pulse.
Ready to release.
Pace I rode.
Began to increase.
Your eyes are focused.
Dead on me.
“Cum. Let me see.”
There it is.
Innocence gone.
I watched it go.
Like a sweet song.
I was your first.
I granted your wish.
Quench a thirst.
Scratched an itch.
I will never see you.
Only thoughts in my mind.
How I took you.
How you were mine.
I do all the work.
Relax
Remove your shirt.
Mmmm
Nice, I want to lick
Give it a flick,
Of my tongue.
Watching you
Come undone.
Silken flesh
Smoooth.
Touch and caress.
Don’t fear me.
You waited so long.
Who would have thought.
I’d be your number one.
I’ll set the bar high.
No one can touch.
Open those thighs.
Breathing in your musk.
You tremble already?
We just begun.
You haven’t entered yet.
And you are sprung.
Let me drink you.
Taste that drop.
On the tip of my tongue,
Like a lollipop.
It is time ,
For me to climb.
Pushing you in,
Watching you sin.
As I take,
What you freely give.
No regrets.
It’s time to live.
I felt you pulse.
Ready to release.
Pace I rode.
Began to increase.
Your eyes are focused.
Dead on me.
“Cum. Let me see.”
There it is.
Innocence gone.
I watched it go.
Like a sweet song.
I was your first.
I granted your wish.
Quench a thirst.
Scratched an itch.
I will never see you.
Only thoughts in my mind.
How I took you.
How you were mine.
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Re. His First
24th Mar 2024 3:33am
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24th Mar 2024 12:03pm
Re. His First
24th Mar 2024 7:31am
Welcome to DUP. A poignant picture painted of first time sex (first time for one of the couple if not both), from the narrator's POV an encounter that will not be repeated with the same person. Favourite chunks and lines
You tremble already?
We just begun.
You haven’t entered yet.
And you are sprung.
Let me drink you.
Taste that drop.
On the tip of my tongue,
Like a lollipop.......
AND
Like a sweet song.
I was your first.
I granted your wish.
Quench a thirst.
Scratched an itch.
I will never see you. [there the thought saddens]
Only thoughts in my mind.
How I took you.
How you were mine.
This gets this into my RL.
You tremble already?
We just begun.
You haven’t entered yet.
And you are sprung.
Let me drink you.
Taste that drop.
On the tip of my tongue,
Like a lollipop.......
AND
Like a sweet song.
I was your first.
I granted your wish.
Quench a thirst.
Scratched an itch.
I will never see you. [there the thought saddens]
Only thoughts in my mind.
How I took you.
How you were mine.
This gets this into my RL.
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Re: Re. His First
24th Mar 2024 12:05pm
Re. His First
24th Mar 2024 2:02pm
Tasty poem, poetess.
Love this first post.
Welcome to DUP. You’re gonna love it here.
Love this first post.
Welcome to DUP. You’re gonna love it here.
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Re: Re. His First
24th Mar 2024 2:19pm
Re. His First
25th Mar 2024 12:00pm
👏 👏 👏 absolutely excellent 👏 ink spill queen 👸 🙌 ♥ there's nothing like your first it replays all the time in your mind
Just press rewind and let the magic happen as the stars 🌟 burst!!!
Please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Just press rewind and let the magic happen as the stars 🌟 burst!!!
Please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re: Re. His First
25th Mar 2024 3:02pm
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26th Mar 2024 12:37pm
Re. His First
26th Mar 2024 3:00pm
These last two lines resonate the most;
“How I took you. How you were mine.”
I feel like this too on most occasions.
You’ve got some incredible sexual energy, it’s nice to read and feel it through your poetry! ✨
“How I took you. How you were mine.”
I feel like this too on most occasions.
You’ve got some incredible sexual energy, it’s nice to read and feel it through your poetry! ✨
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Re: Re. His First
27th Mar 2024 1:05am
Re. His First
30th Mar 2024 12:09pm
I gave my cherry to my brothers girlfriend. T'was a good night. He was passed out drunk and she needed a man.
Anyway!
A most visual, sensual journey into the kingdom of manhood through the sacred doors of the temple of Woman. Opened with a kiss, sealed with a substance that can orchestrate the future. 😘xxx
Anyway!
A most visual, sensual journey into the kingdom of manhood through the sacred doors of the temple of Woman. Opened with a kiss, sealed with a substance that can orchestrate the future. 😘xxx
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30th Mar 2024 11:40pm
Re. His First
3rd May 2024 3:43am
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3rd May 2024 3:48am
Re: Re. His First
3rd May 2024 1:39pm
I need to explain the reason I put "Sin" I was raised catholic and at the time it was happening I was having a dilemma.
Should I be his first or should I leave him for the other girl who he could possibly marry?
He was in love with me at the time and I decided to move forward.
To have sex outside of marriage is a sin. That was how I was raised and if you read other poems, you would see I mention a sister (nun) commenting in my mind.
Should I be his first or should I leave him for the other girl who he could possibly marry?
He was in love with me at the time and I decided to move forward.
To have sex outside of marriage is a sin. That was how I was raised and if you read other poems, you would see I mention a sister (nun) commenting in my mind.
Re: Re. His First
5th May 2024 12:35pm
Ok, I will take a look at that interesting dynamic & aspects from the work you have mentioned. 😊
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5th Aug 2024 3:48pm
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5th Aug 2024 3:49pm
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