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A Sunday Morn
on this
silent Sundy morn
visions of tranquility filter down
my crown chakra...
softly
ever...so...softly
like a latent cerebral breeze
an ethereal tease
bearing gifts of solitude
and gratitude...
eye am
windswept... stilled
and shaded simultaneously
beneath the willow of my lover's soul...
nature's canopy..
the lover of
my soul...
i can feel her emotions liquify
as the {ravine of she} reveals reflections
of her movement...
her branches hovering
her leaves healing....
her roots...reconciling urges
nudging my quill to woolgather
these moods into the rhapsodic pattern of us
upon the quilt beneath her bosom
on this silent Sunday morn
silent Sundy morn
visions of tranquility filter down
my crown chakra...
softly
ever...so...softly
like a latent cerebral breeze
an ethereal tease
bearing gifts of solitude
and gratitude...
eye am
windswept... stilled
and shaded simultaneously
beneath the willow of my lover's soul...
nature's canopy..
the lover of
my soul...
i can feel her emotions liquify
as the {ravine of she} reveals reflections
of her movement...
her branches hovering
her leaves healing....
her roots...reconciling urges
nudging my quill to woolgather
these moods into the rhapsodic pattern of us
upon the quilt beneath her bosom
on this silent Sunday morn
Published 22nd Mar 2024
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22nd Mar 2024 5:03pm
...why did this ink wrap me like a soft blanket, as I reclined in my rocking chair on the front porch, drinking coffee on a Sunday morn....
....just...sigh...
....just...sigh...
22nd Mar 2024 5:10pm
It's only Friday here... 😉 but this read like a deep, contented sigh anyway. Beautiful imagery & emotion.
❤️k
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22nd Mar 2024 6:30pm
I didn’t realize the long sigh I was expelling until this was over.
So gorgeous, Naaj.
So gorgeous, Naaj.
22nd Mar 2024 6:37pm
22nd Mar 2024 7:53pm
This is uniquely expressive in capturing the feel of atmosphere conveyed. Hints of softened understanding are an easily observable subtlety. In the narration of examining and reflecting, a mood lift and inspiration moves like a still serenity, taking a pause to ponder. It's as if to listen to the gentle sounds of silence, feeling the sight of the wind. The attention span couples thoughts and heart together, both serving soothing and calm reassurance, found in self and nature. Like a mild euphoria, the sensation of life comes to light. That's just some of what I pick up from this. Anyway, great job overall. Thanks for sharing.
23rd Mar 2024 5:27am
24th Mar 2024 10:41am
'' beneath the willow of my lover's soul...''
Some figures of speech really amazing and attractive,
Romantically expressed, lover's warmth beneath a cozy willow.
Stay happy Naajir, God bless my friend.
Some figures of speech really amazing and attractive,
Romantically expressed, lover's warmth beneath a cozy willow.
Stay happy Naajir, God bless my friend.
9th Apr 2024 3:36am
Nature infused sensuality with stellar assonance and metaphorical essence...
I'm with the other ladies when it comes down to that sigh. "Eye" love how you used that clever uniqueness and also tied it together with the "silent Sunday morn" refrain.
I'm with the other ladies when it comes down to that sigh. "Eye" love how you used that clever uniqueness and also tied it together with the "silent Sunday morn" refrain.
