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Rhyme ?
I’m your queen
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
Not mean
Most of the time
Unless drinking vodka and lime
My Rhyme sucks
I don’t give 2 fucks
You're cute
And astute
Give me a prayer
I promise to pull your hair
It will be fun
I don’t carry a gun
I’m smart not dumb
Your beautiful hair … no gum
Author's Note
No offense meant to those who write rhyme, it’s just not my thing ….
Self Portrait snarling face of Poetspeak
Self Portrait snarling face of Poetspeak
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Re. Rhyme ?
21st Mar 2024 7:52pm
FUCKING GREAT! I enjoy both sides of rhyming. This poem is true to your feelings. EXCELLENT!
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21st Mar 2024 7:54pm
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21st Mar 2024 8:50pm
I have random rhyming myself. But I struggle with formulaic rhyming. That's an area I leave to those far better than I at it
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21st Mar 2024 9:37pm
My cousin told me that unless a poem rhymes it’s not poetry so I sent him a few of my non-rhyme jobs and he changed his tune FAST. Then I sent him a box head painting for his 80th birthday and now he thinks I’m a genius ….
WTF ?
WTF ?
Re. Rhyme ?
21st Mar 2024 9:33pm
You don't carry a gun with bullets. Your weapon is mandingo where you put a huge load in her sexy pussy while giving her orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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21st Mar 2024 9:37pm
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22nd Mar 2024 1:05am
Rhyme comes & goes for me. Sometimes an entire poem is based around it, and other times it's completely irrelevant.
Definitely keep the gum out of the hair!!
Fun write
❤️k
Definitely keep the gum out of the hair!!
Fun write
❤️k
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22nd Mar 2024 3:28am
I just roll with whatever is spinning in my brain jar. Needed a place to use that snarky pic too.
THX SEXY RED
🤠❤
THX SEXY RED
🤠❤
Re. Rhyme ?
22nd Mar 2024 2:10am
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22nd Mar 2024 3:30am
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2024 2:10am
Seriously love the prayer and hair rhyme.
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22nd Mar 2024 3:31am
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22nd Mar 2024 3:32am
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22nd Mar 2024 3:29am
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22nd Mar 2024 3:33am
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2024 4:04am
Please don't hate me forever, but the photo kind of looks like Billy Idol with food poisoning.
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22nd Mar 2024 10:36am
Thank you for the non-compliment.
Actually it's pretty flattering and I hope someone told Billy Idol that he looks like a craggy Poetspeak. I think it's a hilarious picture of neoNYC angst !!!
Thx Pink
I could never hate ya
😻💌
Actually it's pretty flattering and I hope someone told Billy Idol that he looks like a craggy Poetspeak. I think it's a hilarious picture of neoNYC angst !!!
Thx Pink
I could never hate ya
😻💌
Re. Rhyme ?
22nd Mar 2024 11:13am
Loved it. As I writer that sometimes rhymes, I found this quite sublime.
I admire how it shakes its fists and points, definitely an NYC joint!
This has me looking forward to number two, 'til then I'll watch you be you!
Cool pic too!
I admire how it shakes its fists and points, definitely an NYC joint!
This has me looking forward to number two, 'til then I'll watch you be you!
Cool pic too!
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22nd Mar 2024 11:32am
Yeah Thor
Lotta attitude here
If you don’t have it you fear
The bastards riding bikes on sidewalks
I’m gonna grab one and give a good talk
You do that anymore
Gonna mess up your face and out the door
Rhyme is okay if in a rap
Otherwise it’s too pretty, who gives a crap ?
Thanks brother
Twin of my mother
May she Rest In Peace
She always prepared a feast
Lotta attitude here
If you don’t have it you fear
The bastards riding bikes on sidewalks
I’m gonna grab one and give a good talk
You do that anymore
Gonna mess up your face and out the door
Rhyme is okay if in a rap
Otherwise it’s too pretty, who gives a crap ?
Thanks brother
Twin of my mother
May she Rest In Peace
She always prepared a feast
Re. Rhyme ?
22nd Mar 2024 6:38pm
Okay, queen… (sorry, I HAD too)
I’m getting a prayer ready and putting my hair up so it’s easy to grab…
And you absolutely must make that face!
Laughing my ass off over here. I totally dig this.
I’m getting a prayer ready and putting my hair up so it’s easy to grab…
And you absolutely must make that face!
Laughing my ass off over here. I totally dig this.
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22nd Mar 2024 6:53pm
That’s my famous disgusted face.
Can make it on command.
I have other funny ones too.
Maybe I’ll post another.
Love hair pulling
Keep my bitches in line
They love it too
Thx HER 🤡
Can make it on command.
I have other funny ones too.
Maybe I’ll post another.
Love hair pulling
Keep my bitches in line
They love it too
Thx HER 🤡
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Apr 2024 6:45am
23rd Mar 2024 2:42am
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23rd Mar 2024 2:45am
Kink biting is an acquired taste.
I say give it a whirl, there's plenty to chew on ...
I say give it a whirl, there's plenty to chew on ...
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23rd Mar 2024 2:48am
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23rd Mar 2024 2:51am
Anonymous
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23rd Mar 2024 2:56am
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23rd Mar 2024 3:00am
Ok
You get the last word.
Nobody has ever called me a silver fox before. So that's maybe kinda cool.
I like my own stink pits. Something miraculous about it ....
You get the last word.
Nobody has ever called me a silver fox before. So that's maybe kinda cool.
I like my own stink pits. Something miraculous about it ....
Re. Rhyme ?
23rd Mar 2024 11:42am
I hear you, not a fan of rhyme too.
Near rhyme yes, assonance yes, rhyme: hell no.
Near rhyme yes, assonance yes, rhyme: hell no.
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23rd Mar 2024 12:06pm
Amen !!
To me it's too simple, almost the way I feel about doing digital art. I can do something extraordinary difficult in less than 2 minutes that would take me weeks to do in real painting. Actually I probably couldn't achieve it in real paint. But the point is there's no sweat and toil or nuance in digital. I feel the same about rhyme. Once in a while sure, z couple of rhyme within a non-rhyming write but not all the time. Many would differ. That's what makes a horse race as the saying goes ....
Thank you for the comment D
Appreciate you
To me it's too simple, almost the way I feel about doing digital art. I can do something extraordinary difficult in less than 2 minutes that would take me weeks to do in real painting. Actually I probably couldn't achieve it in real paint. But the point is there's no sweat and toil or nuance in digital. I feel the same about rhyme. Once in a while sure, z couple of rhyme within a non-rhyming write but not all the time. Many would differ. That's what makes a horse race as the saying goes ....
Thank you for the comment D
Appreciate you
Re. Rhyme ?
24th Mar 2024 1:27am
I know it's not for everyone, same as minimalism, or strict structure and forms. You have your own style and from what I've seen in the past, you have a big audience Poet.
BL.
BL.
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24th Mar 2024 2:44am
I’m not exactly sure why my following is so large.
Maybe it’s because I say stuff blatantly. As discussed I have nothing against rhyme most of the time … hey that rhymed .,
Thanks for always supporting me W
Appreciate
Maybe it’s because I say stuff blatantly. As discussed I have nothing against rhyme most of the time … hey that rhymed .,
Thanks for always supporting me W
Appreciate
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5th Jul 2024 3:24am
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5th Jul 2024 3:36am