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Night
The night is long
and full of pain.
Does little darling
have no shame?
Lies stain like coal,
in Satan's name
go wash it all
out in the rain.
and full of pain.
Does little darling
have no shame?
Lies stain like coal,
in Satan's name
go wash it all
out in the rain.
Published 6th Mar 2024
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6th Mar 2024 3:32pm
7th Mar 2024 6:20am
Dear S,
This piece may be brief but for me, the shame and sadness are palpable. You make every word count in this piece. Excellent writing. H🌷
This piece may be brief but for me, the shame and sadness are palpable. You make every word count in this piece. Excellent writing. H🌷
