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Make Me Warm All Over
It got so cold
that flash freeze
needs the warmth
of your parted knees
did I say pretty please?
That crisp air
got me in a shiver
I guess we haven't fully made it
through the winter
but what better reason
to make you quiver?
That calling cocoon
in glorious pink,
seems so wet and ready
for this length to sink
Oh yes, riding high
your bounce slapping against my thighs
I think we found the antidote
to conjure some warmth
and a glorious sunrise.
that flash freeze
needs the warmth
of your parted knees
did I say pretty please?
That crisp air
got me in a shiver
I guess we haven't fully made it
through the winter
but what better reason
to make you quiver?
That calling cocoon
in glorious pink,
seems so wet and ready
for this length to sink
Oh yes, riding high
your bounce slapping against my thighs
I think we found the antidote
to conjure some warmth
and a glorious sunrise.
Published 29th Feb 2024
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29th Feb 2024 12:31pm
1st Mar 2024 11:52am
1st Mar 2024 1:25am
Oh yes, riding high
your bounce slapping against my thighs
I think we found the antidote
to conjure some warmth
and a glorious sunrise.
Oh, my what beautiful and endearing words, a tender poet has inscribed upon his canvas. If I were to close my eyes, I can imagine the allurement of your poetic sentiments.
Your words are smoothly composed.
On such a worthy praise, that's well deserved, please enjoy the remainder of your Thursday evening and upon your Grand Rising enjoy your Friday in all you may do.🍯
your bounce slapping against my thighs
I think we found the antidote
to conjure some warmth
and a glorious sunrise.
Oh, my what beautiful and endearing words, a tender poet has inscribed upon his canvas. If I were to close my eyes, I can imagine the allurement of your poetic sentiments.
Your words are smoothly composed.
On such a worthy praise, that's well deserved, please enjoy the remainder of your Thursday evening and upon your Grand Rising enjoy your Friday in all you may do.🍯
1st Mar 2024 11:57am
Delighted that those "smooth" sentiments could be experienced in the imagination and senses.
Hopefully it has delivered the neccessary warmth to combat the seasonal chill.
And a nice passage to highlight the gallop of excitement.
A lovely Friday and upcoming weekend to you, SKC.
Hopefully it has delivered the neccessary warmth to combat the seasonal chill.
And a nice passage to highlight the gallop of excitement.
A lovely Friday and upcoming weekend to you, SKC.
