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Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
The face still handsome
yet he is no longer there
to paradise flown
yet he is no longer there
to paradise flown
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 20th Feb 2024
| Edited 21st Feb 2024
Author's Note
Goodbye dear father!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
20th Feb 2024 10:46pm
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20th Feb 2024 11:25pm
Thank you, Liam. Although heartbroken, I was blessed to have his guidance for 60 years.
Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
20th Feb 2024 11:36pm
Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
21st Feb 2024 2:46am
Oh... sorry, Bob. Wishing you peace & comfort in your loss.
What a lovely little minimalist tribute this is.
❤️k
What a lovely little minimalist tribute this is.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
Thank you so much, K❣ Over the years I've written many poems featuring my dad. At his memorial service I read two of them...it was a beautiful experience. My daughter and I also sang "How Great Thou Art with piano and guitar accompaniment.
Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
21st Feb 2024 3:55pm
Dear GW,
You honor your dad with such a beautiful tribute. I was so sorry to read this and my heart felt condolences. This is a lovely gift to him. H🌷
You honor your dad with such a beautiful tribute. I was so sorry to read this and my heart felt condolences. This is a lovely gift to him. H🌷
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Re: Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
21st Feb 2024 5:48pm
Thank you so much, Honoria❤️I appreciate your condolences very much. He is a wonderful father, a model of kindness.
Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
22nd Feb 2024 3:38pm
Yah neh, when love is no longer the same but the person is still there...
I can truly relate
I can truly relate
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Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
26th Feb 2024 3:44am
Sending all my deepest condolences, dear BB.
You penned a lovely homage, indeed.
(hugs)
🌹💙 💙 - B
You penned a lovely homage, indeed.
(hugs)
🌹💙 💙 - B
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Re. Senryu: Hard, Beautiful Adieu
28th Feb 2024 8:31pm
In all the chambers of your heart your precious father will reside.. carved in your mind his beautiful soul and memories.. and within the beauty of your poetry.. May your dad rest in peace and may God bless you with acceptance and serenity..
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