Unspoken

A Misunderstandin might be a reason to stay in the shadow, direct speech is always a solution
Happy Times.........

you're right, it surely is. direct speech has its power. thank you for understanding!

Based on your poem the illustration was perfect. A+ Hugs and peace, Oral

thank you!

Hey there. Welcome to DU. Don’t eat all the good biscuits. 😆

The first thing I notice about your little offering here is how the piece is completely devoid of punctuation and grammar. Sometimes I really like that about the piece, because it becomes this really pure thought that is all the writer. So I actually really appreciated that.

Secondly, I love these first person narrative pieces. I love how that ending of being trapped in your own guilt directly ties in with the title - an echo of unspoken emotions. That’s what I enjoy about poetry, really. The expression of things that are there lingering beneath the surface.

Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your words.

-M

You worded that out beautifully, I appreciate your remarks, it really means a lot. Also, thank you for the warm welcome! :)

Resignates with Mr very well

Intriguing write... welcome to DUP...

Hey Lilliputian, this resonated thru my soul, sometimes the reasons we lose friendship is not always us being the problem, it’s a problem in their lives. Really good ink. Purple luv & hugs 💜

you're right, yet it's not easy to live with that. thank you for your words, much appreciated. 💜

Always have the respect & understanding for yourself & for the ones you love. If that doesn't work for the friend or lover then it could be them & an issue they have. Great poem and a wonderful image.

ah, this first poem here.. thank you, i truly appreciate your words.