eye of the beholder

I've been there, quietly from my pillow.

Beautifully done, Blue. You make words sing. :)

Oh, wow... That's a fantastic compliment, T.. thanks for hearing my 'song'


I appreciate you, the time you give me and the very generous RL add.

Have a wonderful VD!
🌹💞💖💘🌹

Mmm.Mmm.Mmm.
Yummy.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏

💞💞💞

That does sound awfully pleasant.  

Mmmhmm... doesn't it!?!

Thanks for snuggling into this one, MS
l love that you felt that pleasantry. ;p

Happy Valentine's Day
💖

Splendid write…

Thanks for the lovely visit today LilD.

Thrilled to see you, appreciate you taking the time  
Have a wonderful Valentine's day!
❣️❣️❣️

A beautiful, sexual poem on Valentines Day. Your words always flow gracefully.

I'm taken aback, at 'gracefully', so thanks for that kindness. I usually find the most ingenious ways of being as clumsy as fuck, IRL so it's wonderful to read something different about myself, here.

All my deep appreciation for taking the time to leave me your thoughts.
Have a wonderful Valentine's day

🌹 B

Wow, you never disappoint Bluebonnet. This poem is simply calm and serene…

Thanks for sharing 😘
Always your sis 💙
Jackie xo
*Happy Valentines Day Susan*
💌 💋 🤗

Hey there, Jackie!
Happy Valentine's Day, to you too, lovely lady!💘
Thanks for being here with me... I hope you're hanging in there!

*I really appreciate how you felt a kind of serenity and calmness, that's very cool, indeed.

Much love,
🌹💙 - B

💌💋♥️😘🤗🤗🤗

You're the freaking best...


Keep hanging in there, lovely one.... your day is coming!!
🌹 💋 💋 💋

Yours too ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

Lovely ... Bless and love ... ..

Thank youuuuuuu!

No, you're lovely... lol ;p

Returned blessings, dear FeNyX
🌹 💙 💙 💙

I'm lost in your beauty my smart strong beautiful sexy woman.  Keep on writing.

Well isn't that beyond kind to say!! .... Thank you so much for the compliment and encouragement, Francisco

I always count on you!!
🌹B

To be the object of such loving observation would be highly intoxicating. You've penned a beautifully lyrical sigh here...just makes one inhale the beauty & longing & sigh.

I was a bit concerned it might be seen or read as creepy... lol... so I'm thrilled that you found it to be how I pictured it in my head... Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts; your pov and opinions are meaningful and extremely helpful to me and my desire for continued growth...  

Hope you enjoyed your day yesterday, dear lady.

All my warmest,
🌹B

Happy Valentine's Day 🌼

Awww...
Thank you for that warm sentiment... (gotta love it when he brings wildflowers!)

It's a pleasure... beyond.
Much love, dear J
🌹💙
B

makes me believe

A little fairy 🧚🏻‍♀️ dust will do it... ✨


Thank you for stopping by and for letting me know you're a fellow believer.

Much love sent your way...
🌹B

Valentine day it was, I never celebrate it love should be everyday not one

As always an A++. Hugs and love. Oral

Thank you for that A++ high praise, Oral...
I appreciate you and your encouraging support.


Hope you have a great weekend, my lovely friend
🌹💙 💙
-B

Wow…very great!

Awww... thanks so much for those kind words, tell_me_wy.
I really appreciate you thinking this piece was great, it means a lot.

It's always nice to see you, don't be a stranger.

🌹B

Truly this one made me think with every line.
I will copy this into my save folder in DU
Thank you  
Richard
Word ms questioned reveling so I right clicked to see what the spellcheck arrived at - Revelling [possibly celebrating] - reviling NOT a word for this poem (discounted) - or revealing [see-through] a maybe as your writing always asks more questions than it answers or possibly an American spelling into a new dictionary of possibilities - ever a poetic conundrum?

Their playtime session was ending, hence the 'soft' reveling (meaning here is yes, a celebration or to relish or savor in a beautifully heady erotic completion)


Thank you for enjoying this ink like you have, R. Like minded folks like yourself are fuel to my fire and keep me motivated to  
continue my poetic journey.

Hope that clarifies, my friend
🌹B

It more than clarifies. It makes me think on your thought processes and how you will create the next poem
Richard

Absolutely beautiful
Go girl smashed it as usual
Love and light
Ron xx

You're awesome....I absolutely love this comment!! ..Yesss....
I always strive for a... smash!! 💥⚾ 📝

hahaha..

It made me smile ear to ear that you think it was!!!
Woo-hoo.

I truly adore you being steadfast on my team, my dear.
🌹-💙-⚔️

You captured an excellent mix of erotica and romantic love. Wonderful work Blue, simply wonderful.

Thanks for feeling the romance within the ecstasy, Walter.
So so glad you did.

🌹💙 - B

Tenderly wrought poem of submission that seeks in the gentle night a man who appreciates her lovely way of bowing and infuses love into his dominion. There is nothing more beautiful and passionate than gentle yielding and him watching her fall into the arms of Morpheus with nothing but the intent to give pleasure and receive it as a sacred offering on the altar of sensual love. This is breathtakingly penned in a way that captures the mood of the evening rites of submission with achingly gorgeous imagery that wraps around me as I read. And I am enthralled by the magic of your yielding.

embraces and whispered love,
John

John,
Yes, my lovely, it is the ultimate trust and proven love... I tried my best to really impress upon the reader a picture of tenderness within a Dom/s relationship without being blatant; one that was truly meaningful and deep, where you could feel the emotional gravitas and absolute devotion, not just the kink..

So happy you could feel that infusion, my darling.

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me, it's priceless.

Much love,
🌹-Susan

As always,  you are the queen of true erotica leaving one's imagination to run laps until out of breath.
Exquisite,  my dear.

hugs,
buddhakitty.

Mmmm... my favorite kind of breathlessness!!
Love that you found some worthy erotic sensations, here....


*big Cheshire cat smiles*

Thanks, dear kitty
🌹💙 💙 - B

such sweet sensual words spilled on thy canvas

Much obliged for your kind words here...

🌹B

Quite content, the deceptive barely audible purring signaling your growling libido has been fed and sedated. Falling away into a deep satisfying slumber.  Special moment you describe, watching a partner sleeping serenely is satisfying, bonding and cathartic.

It's a hushed impactful moment that is meant to reveal how deeply felt their unspoken bond and pure affinity between them, goes.... it's the deepest of recesses, where two people are part of one existing whole....

Thank you for taking a peek and feeling that true sensational bond.

🌹💙 💙

I love this beautifully peaceful, romantic piece. The font changes are perfect representations of the words❤🌹

Thank youuuuuuu, BB
🐻 💞 🐰

-x

Romantic and sumptuous.  I like your word choice and placement.  Fresh and artistic with all the right emphasis.  Intellectually articulated.

Lovely words, DK.
I thank you so much for taking a looksee at my poem and felt what it was that I had hoped to convey. I've been on a sort of hiatus recently, so your visit was surprisingly wonderful.

I look forward to reading you.
Much love and warmest regards,
🌹B