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Dirty Mind
sinking my teeth in, I bite you
taking my time getting to know your vibe
then inject my lust into your veins
to arouse your temper
you don't want to desire me
but here you are...turned on
the temperature is up
you're craving my dark
I undulate atop you
taking you fully in
I seek your greed
titillating the moment I feel your need
grievous way is you underestimating me
I will get under your skin
deep within your passions you know
I am there thrust for thrust
gaining your trust
honesty in a blush
captivated you go deeper
where you find my innocence
for such a vixen I am gentle
delivering your fantasies
sealing our fate with a kiss
that is simply orgasmic
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Re. Dirty Mind
1st Feb 2024 00:29am
Dark, sexy, brooding, captivating. The image of the girl is mesmerizing. Nicely done. Beautifully packaged.
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1st Feb 2024 00:30am
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1st Feb 2024 00:34am
Wow this is smokin’ hot. I was drawn in for sure but I would never underestimate you!
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1st Feb 2024 00:35am
good afternoon dearest poet thank you for being so kind to me I would love to write with you I think we could come up with something brilliantly dark 💕
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1st Feb 2024 00:39am
I would love to, just let me know. We might have to decide just how dark of course.
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1st Feb 2024 00:42am
when you get something a few lines whatever send them to me... I will do the same...I'm really good at weaving collaborations together... when I get something I will message you too...
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1st Feb 2024 1:18am
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1st Feb 2024 1:25am
hello dearest Ron good evening thank friend for the love on this love and light 💕
Re. Dirty Mind
1st Feb 2024 2:32am
Hi Crimsin!
I love all of your dark lust stuff! It kicks ass!!
When I read this version of you it is so empowering.
I bet it feels that way for you when writing:)
I love all of your dark lust stuff! It kicks ass!!
When I read this version of you it is so empowering.
I bet it feels that way for you when writing:)
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4th Feb 2024 3:55pm
hello beautiful Adelphina thank you most graciously please forgive my late response I got behind and thought I caught up you always make me smile 💕
Re. Dirty Mind
1st Feb 2024 4:36am
I love the badassery and take control vibe, dear lady. It's dense, so heady and demanding of 100% attention that you better not even glance away for one second!!!... lol. You write this sensual, sexy vixen like no other.... period. It's almost ingrained, I feel.
To bask in this world of hers, is to feel all these sinfully delicious talents of yours wash over us in wonderful fantasy. The command of presence and the power that exudes, fully intoxicates.
.. and i drink aplenty...
Looking forward to reading any collaborations you conjure.
Exquisitely lush read.
I thoroughly enjoyed.
🌹💙
To bask in this world of hers, is to feel all these sinfully delicious talents of yours wash over us in wonderful fantasy. The command of presence and the power that exudes, fully intoxicates.
.. and i drink aplenty...
Looking forward to reading any collaborations you conjure.
Exquisitely lush read.
I thoroughly enjoyed.
🌹💙
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4th Feb 2024 3:57pm
hello beautiful Blue good morning please forgive my late reply I got so behind here during a depressed state...you made my day reading your comment today... you are so giving of yourself it's so lovely... thank you lovely one 💕
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4th Feb 2024 3:58pm
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Re. Dirty Mind
16th Feb 2024 6:25pm
Well well well. It seems like a lot of here are DUP share a similar sentiment when it comes to having dirty minds and you dear Crim have penned it nicely.
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16th Feb 2024 11:23pm