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i heard her voice
i heard her voice
and winter moved,
spring arrived
like tenderness,
like fresh flower blooms,
so sweet, intoxicating
in each way,
words she spoke
danced all around me,
i would caress each moment
if i were allowed
to hear her every day.,
and winter moved,
spring arrived
like tenderness,
like fresh flower blooms,
so sweet, intoxicating
in each way,
words she spoke
danced all around me,
i would caress each moment
if i were allowed
to hear her every day.,
Published 30th Jan 2024
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30th Jan 2024 10:18am
30th Jan 2024 10:26am
Anonymous
30th Jan 2024 1:01pm
So ready for the heady breath of spring. To find someone who embodies that freshness is a beautiful thing!
30th Jan 2024 7:21pm
7th Feb 2024 4:58pm
Hello wolfatthedoor... how are you man... Dig this write, your first 2 lines were strong
"i heard her voice
and winter moved," ... That was good phrasing. For me, that built the rest of the write around it... Take good care man
"i heard her voice
and winter moved," ... That was good phrasing. For me, that built the rest of the write around it... Take good care man
7th Feb 2024 8:52pm
