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Afraid of The Dark
I'm afraid the dark
The eerie shadows peering around the corners make me cringe
My heart races as my eyes battle to adjust to the Change
My mind screaming every alarm Beckoning me to run away
As if something lurks in the shadows ready to attack for the kill
I'm afraid of the dark
Frozen in fear as my hands begin to shake and throb
My mind is racing I've got to get out of here but I can't move
Oxygen leaves my lungs as I stare into blackness and sickening memories
Fingernails rip open my skin as the panic attack sets up full swing
I'm so afraid of the dark
Open your eyes Open your Eyes I tell myself
Gasping as I hyperventilate until I'm dizzy and confused
Please no don't hurt me again I don't understand this torment
Rocking back and forth trying to get a grip on reality
I'm so afraid of the dark
Hands grip mine stopping my nails relentless attack
Arms wrap themselves around me letting me know I'm no longer alone
Another panic attack sent me into mu darkest version of hell
A black world where all my insecurities and deepest fears linger to attack
Please save me, I'm still afraid of the dark
The eerie shadows peering around the corners make me cringe
My heart races as my eyes battle to adjust to the Change
My mind screaming every alarm Beckoning me to run away
As if something lurks in the shadows ready to attack for the kill
I'm afraid of the dark
Frozen in fear as my hands begin to shake and throb
My mind is racing I've got to get out of here but I can't move
Oxygen leaves my lungs as I stare into blackness and sickening memories
Fingernails rip open my skin as the panic attack sets up full swing
I'm so afraid of the dark
Open your eyes Open your Eyes I tell myself
Gasping as I hyperventilate until I'm dizzy and confused
Please no don't hurt me again I don't understand this torment
Rocking back and forth trying to get a grip on reality
I'm so afraid of the dark
Hands grip mine stopping my nails relentless attack
Arms wrap themselves around me letting me know I'm no longer alone
Another panic attack sent me into mu darkest version of hell
A black world where all my insecurities and deepest fears linger to attack
Please save me, I'm still afraid of the dark
Published 27th Jan 2024
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27th Jan 2024 10:19am
1st Feb 2024 1:47am
3rd Feb 2024 9:13pm
Embrace the darkness. It will make you stronger or consume your soul in unimaginable ways.
29th Mar 2024 12:48pm
This poem vividly captures the visceral fear and panic associated with being afraid of the dark. The imagery of eerie shadows, racing heartbeats, and the feeling of being paralyzed by fear effectively conveys the intensity of the emotion experienced by the narrator. The repetition of the phrase "I'm afraid of the dark" emphasizes the recurring nature of this fear and the desperation to escape its grip.
The poem also touches on the psychological aspect of fear, as the darkness becomes a metaphor for confronting one's inner demons and traumatic memories. The line "sickening memories" hints at past experiences that continue to haunt the narrator, exacerbating their fear of the dark.
The resolution of the poem, with the comforting presence of another person offering support and solace, provides a glimmer of hope amidst the darkness. However, the final plea "Please save me, I'm still afraid of the dark" underscores the enduring nature of the fear and the ongoing struggle to overcome it.
Overall, this poem effectively captures the terror, vulnerability, and longing for reassurance that often accompany the fear of the dark, making it relatable to anyone who has grappled with this primal fear.
26th Apr 2024 1:49am
Thank you very much for your kind words. Im.glad that my poem sent the message I was trying to convey
27th Apr 2024 3:22pm
You're very welcome! Your poem truly spoke volumes, and I appreciate the sentiment behind it. If you're open to it, I'd love to connect with you on Facebook and continue our conversation there. Let me know if that sounds good to you!
30th Apr 2024 9:08pm
1st May 2024 6:09am
Good morning, my dear friend,
I hope this message finds you well and filled with the promise of a beautiful day ahead. As the sun rises to greet us, I wanted to take a moment to reach out and connect with you.
Our conversations always brighten my day, and I find myself longing for more moments of laughter and camaraderie with you. If you're open to it, I would love to continue our discussions via email. I find that I'm more active there, and it would provide us with a platform to delve deeper into our conversations.
You can reach me at louisematteo349@.com, and I eagerly await your response. Let's seize the day and make it one to remember!
Wishing you a morning filled with joy and blessings,
Louis
I hope this message finds you well and filled with the promise of a beautiful day ahead. As the sun rises to greet us, I wanted to take a moment to reach out and connect with you.
Our conversations always brighten my day, and I find myself longing for more moments of laughter and camaraderie with you. If you're open to it, I would love to continue our discussions via email. I find that I'm more active there, and it would provide us with a platform to delve deeper into our conversations.
You can reach me at louisematteo349@.com, and I eagerly await your response. Let's seize the day and make it one to remember!
Wishing you a morning filled with joy and blessings,
Louis
